for The Echo6/10/2006 c1 
4Lovediamond15
hi! this was good, dunno bout joinin your site tho, but since the link has msn in it, im guessin u chat on msn? i hav msn too, nd its always nice to hav sum1 new to tlk to, ill take a look at your site thing nd see if i wanna join. the poem was good.
4Lovediamond15hi! this was good, dunno bout joinin your site tho, but since the link has msn in it, im guessin u chat on msn? i hav msn too, nd its always nice to hav sum1 new to tlk to, ill take a look at your site thing nd see if i wanna join. the poem was good.
1/31/2005 c1 2A Most-Serene Tragedy
Hey, 1. That was really good. =). 2. Thanks for reviwing my poem. Anyways, I'll most DEF. think about joinging your site. =). Just I'm afraid that I won't be able to post within 3 days because I'm really tied up wtih writing. =/. I'll se. =)
2A Most-Serene TragedyHey, 1. That was really good. =). 2. Thanks for reviwing my poem. Anyways, I'll most DEF. think about joinging your site. =). Just I'm afraid that I won't be able to post within 3 days because I'm really tied up wtih writing. =/. I'll se. =)
1/9/2005 c1 False Pretences
and you said you can't write poetry, HA! I think this poem is wonderful, keep writing please!
and you said you can't write poetry, HA! I think this poem is wonderful, keep writing please!
1/9/2005 c1 9rotted reverie
Aww. That was sweet. I've never been in a relationship before, to much shock, but I could imagine the pain it brings about in the end.
And thanks for the invite. My sn is Wackotic, btw.
9rotted reverieAww. That was sweet. I've never been in a relationship before, to much shock, but I could imagine the pain it brings about in the end.
And thanks for the invite. My sn is Wackotic, btw.
1/7/2005 c1 17incandescent.smiles
very well written and you got the emotions down so well i can almost feel the pain. also i like how it doesn't really rhyme. good change of routine for me.
~leila*
17incandescent.smilesvery well written and you got the emotions down so well i can almost feel the pain. also i like how it doesn't really rhyme. good change of routine for me.
~leila*
1/3/2005 c1 51content with rhyme
this is a good poem, keep up the good work. oh, and thank you for the invitation. :o)
51content with rhymethis is a good poem, keep up the good work. oh, and thank you for the invitation. :o)
12/29/2004 c1 4IsisAvenger
The metaphors are excellent, but some of the grammar distracted me.
The first two lines should be one senetence, as in:"Why do you act happy in front of others,Then later slam the door in my face?"
And I don't understand the line "I'm unwillingly fallen apart"; should it be 'falling' perhaps? "On" needs to have that 'w' stuck in there in "I only hear an echo of my on love".
Other than those, it was heartwrenching and beautiful. Write more!
4IsisAvengerThe metaphors are excellent, but some of the grammar distracted me.
The first two lines should be one senetence, as in:"Why do you act happy in front of others,Then later slam the door in my face?"
And I don't understand the line "I'm unwillingly fallen apart"; should it be 'falling' perhaps? "On" needs to have that 'w' stuck in there in "I only hear an echo of my on love".
Other than those, it was heartwrenching and beautiful. Write more!
12/23/2004 c1 7BeautifulEcho
really good emotional poem. Your feelings to whoever crushed oyur heart, were excellently portrayed. Great line about haveing the key to the persons heart, and it no longer fits. once again, excellent job! keep on keepin' on :)
~BeautifulEcho~
7BeautifulEchoreally good emotional poem. Your feelings to whoever crushed oyur heart, were excellently portrayed. Great line about haveing the key to the persons heart, and it no longer fits. once again, excellent job! keep on keepin' on :)
~BeautifulEcho~
12/21/2004 c1 63InfiniteDreamer04
another lovely piece by you. i liked the line "the key i hold...no longer fits your heart." Excellent job
~MT
63InfiniteDreamer04another lovely piece by you. i liked the line "the key i hold...no longer fits your heart." Excellent job
~MT
12/17/2004 c1 1TaschaBear
That was really powerful! SHort but powerful!Thanks for reviewing!
Nessa
P.S: Keep it coming!
1TaschaBearThat was really powerful! SHort but powerful!Thanks for reviewing!
Nessa
P.S: Keep it coming!