for Red Clay Fault Line4/15/2008 c1 Fei
I just realised I was reading this for te third time without commenting, and felt guilty.
This is so well crafted, that every word brings the story to life. The contrast between Jessie and Anna-Rae, the characterisation, the way you set the scene, all of it is incredible. It's short, and sad, but very real.
I just realised I was reading this for te third time without commenting, and felt guilty.
This is so well crafted, that every word brings the story to life. The contrast between Jessie and Anna-Rae, the characterisation, the way you set the scene, all of it is incredible. It's short, and sad, but very real.