2/18/2005 c1 1o0oAnnie
Interesting poem...you really have to read it over a few times to understand it but it's simple and has a good, quick beat to it...bleeding is a quite cliche topic for poems on here but this one is unique...I liked it :) Keep writing!

11/30/2004 c1 62Camman
Kind of redundant, but still worth a read. Silence is the best time to write poetry... unless... :)