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12/3/2007 c1 165softer side of apples
I LOVE IT!
10/8/2007 c1 Arafax
This could really be a beautiful piece if you made it longer and really explored and expanded on what you have already written. Nice work overall though.

~Arafax~
1/28/2005 c1 8Unknown Unnamed
I liked this. Short with open discussion to the meaning. Such a mysterious yet powerful feeling to it. Like looking into someone's eyes and knowing there is something behind there that you can't quite understand. M... mystery. I love it. :)
12/15/2004 c1 19ColdFrost
Short but very powerful.

The last line is perfect!

And extremly good poem
12/2/2004 c1 59Saga Lhan
I kind of like the short poems, because explaining your feelings accuratly in few phrases is true art. Very nice poem, it reminds me of some own experiences.
12/1/2004 c1 11Dark-Poetess
Its too short to get your point accross. Its like writing a story like "Once upon a time in a land far far away, the end" It barely gives you a mental image of the poem before it ends.
12/1/2004 c1 243Manuel Fajar
Thoughtful and well written poem. ┬┐Or will you laugh? Knowing you're still alive, and have a heart and soul to witness life. m

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