for Courage?10/8/2007 c1 Arafax
This could really be a beautiful piece if you made it longer and really explored and expanded on what you have already written. Nice work overall though.
~Arafax~
This could really be a beautiful piece if you made it longer and really explored and expanded on what you have already written. Nice work overall though.
~Arafax~
1/28/2005 c1 
8Unknown Unnamed
I liked this. Short with open discussion to the meaning. Such a mysterious yet powerful feeling to it. Like looking into someone's eyes and knowing there is something behind there that you can't quite understand. M... mystery. I love it. :)
8Unknown UnnamedI liked this. Short with open discussion to the meaning. Such a mysterious yet powerful feeling to it. Like looking into someone's eyes and knowing there is something behind there that you can't quite understand. M... mystery. I love it. :)
12/2/2004 c1 59Saga Lhan
I kind of like the short poems, because explaining your feelings accuratly in few phrases is true art. Very nice poem, it reminds me of some own experiences.
59Saga LhanI kind of like the short poems, because explaining your feelings accuratly in few phrases is true art. Very nice poem, it reminds me of some own experiences.
12/1/2004 c1 11Dark-Poetess
Its too short to get your point accross. Its like writing a story like "Once upon a time in a land far far away, the end" It barely gives you a mental image of the poem before it ends.
11Dark-PoetessIts too short to get your point accross. Its like writing a story like "Once upon a time in a land far far away, the end" It barely gives you a mental image of the poem before it ends.
12/1/2004 c1 243Manuel Fajar
Thoughtful and well written poem. ¿Or will you laugh? Knowing you're still alive, and have a heart and soul to witness life. m
243Manuel FajarThoughtful and well written poem. ¿Or will you laugh? Knowing you're still alive, and have a heart and soul to witness life. m