for Coming Home5/19/2007 c3 Frenchy85
wow suspens... But we don't know Abbey story yet. Why she didn't go to college, why she's not with the father of her son.
I hope it's explained later. I don't like plot hole.
Anyway, I LOVE this story!
wow suspens... But we don't know Abbey story yet. Why she didn't go to college, why she's not with the father of her son.
I hope it's explained later. I don't like plot hole.
Anyway, I LOVE this story!
5/17/2007 c4 boo
can u plz send me tha rest of chapter 4?
thans!11
great stORy
can u plz send me tha rest of chapter 4?
thans!11
great stORy
5/17/2007 c5 
1blondiexoxo
hey i really like it. i hope abby moves in with him soon lol. neways im glad u updated, n i hope u keep writing cuz love this story. ttyl
1blondiexoxohey i really like it. i hope abby moves in with him soon lol. neways im glad u updated, n i hope u keep writing cuz love this story. ttyl
5/16/2007 c4 3Seraph-of-Nightsong
:) excellant job with your story so far! very well written and a captivating storyline. I look forward to reading more :)
and speaking of more.. could you send me that little bit of NC-17 content? :D you probably could have included it within the story since you have it rated at M.
thanks!
3Seraph-of-Nightsong:) excellant job with your story so far! very well written and a captivating storyline. I look forward to reading more :)
and speaking of more.. could you send me that little bit of NC-17 content? :D you probably could have included it within the story since you have it rated at M.
thanks!
5/16/2007 c5 az
i'm getting confused over who some of the people are.
i'm getting confused over who some of the people are.
5/14/2007 c4 Jenny
Wow- the story really picked up. I really like it! Do you think you could email me the rest of this chapter- I'm interested to see how things play out here. Thanks
Wow- the story really picked up. I really like it! Do you think you could email me the rest of this chapter- I'm interested to see how things play out here. Thanks
5/14/2007 c3 Jenny
So he likes her? I feel so bad for Abby- love the story
So he likes her? I feel so bad for Abby- love the story
5/14/2007 c2 Jenny
Ooh- interesting!
Ooh- interesting!
5/14/2007 c1 Jenny
I really like your story! It has a very original twist to a somewhat cliched storyline- i really like it!
I really like your story! It has a very original twist to a somewhat cliched storyline- i really like it!
5/14/2007 c4 daharp
Heyy, great chapter, I'm loving how you're developing the plot, and the characters. I was kind of wondering how you wrote the next NC-17 scene, so I would love it if you could email it to me. I'm writing a story of my own, but I can't get mine to seem right, so I was wondering if I could get some pointers from yours. :) Cheers!
Heyy, great chapter, I'm loving how you're developing the plot, and the characters. I was kind of wondering how you wrote the next NC-17 scene, so I would love it if you could email it to me. I'm writing a story of my own, but I can't get mine to seem right, so I was wondering if I could get some pointers from yours. :) Cheers!
5/12/2007 c4 QQ
UPDATE !
UPDATE !
5/10/2007 c4 vesta-star
I just finished reading it!and theres only one thing i can say...you have to add soon!
plz!it's really getting more interesting!
I just finished reading it!and theres only one thing i can say...you have to add soon!
plz!it's really getting more interesting!
5/8/2007 c4 mojojojo
hey story is really startin to get good plz send me the rest of the chapter although it is rated M so you shud just post it anyway thanx x
hey story is really startin to get good plz send me the rest of the chapter although it is rated M so you shud just post it anyway thanx x