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2/18/2006 c2 29Mad-4-Manga
COOLNESS.^_^!Now for critique:You explained her well. I found how her pirates reacted to be a bit strange, but overall convincing. Levya has a short fuse and a stand-out personality, which leads to some interesting circumstances including smashing the new guy into the ground, cutting the letters of her name into his forhead, and a variety of future possibilities.How Levya and crew felt about what happened says loads for the people they are and the relationships they had with each other. Ingenius. It was subtle but convincing.Awesome work, I hope you continue soon!
2/18/2006 c1 Mad-4-Manga
Awesome.Levya is a really strong character, she sort of reminds me of Alanna (in the Lioness quartet.) ^_~The story line is enough to catch my attention (I'm usually always up for some romance) and I can't wait to get to the next chapter.While, *cough* some of this was kind of cheesy (I found myself chuckling as the poor laddy died), it didn't stay that way.

Welly well well. the end was a bit of a surprise! ^_^At first I was thinking that the dude who kissed Levya was the replacement, but then I decided that he wasn't, only to counter my opinion again as he asked for the captain!I do like how you go about introducing Levya into the story! ^_^Marvelous.Just work on emotions/nightmares a bit and you'll do fine![This is the author you reviewed for on "Red Dragon Makitsu". Just to let you know, I'll be heavily revamping the story, and re-posting RDM once more. ^_^U U U Silly, yes? But necessary. ^.^Well, I'll say TTFN and go read the next chapter!]
12/29/2004 c2 Wolf
do you really think this is going to be so violent it'll be R? well...guess I'll find out...for now you should altually make it pg-13 and say "rating due to change" or something. heehee or you could just ignore me...I'm only your best friend. :P
12/10/2004 c2 1You Make My Date
hey! thanks for your review, and I'm glad you updated :) Also glad that you explained the dream thing was actually a memory, cos I didn't get that at first. Although I don't really like Levya, I'd really like to see where this goes!Please update soon,Carmen
12/10/2004 c2 2Gemma Viridian
Nice job. Though I'm not one to judge, I'd say you've got a fair amount of writing talent. The characterization and humor are especially good; I really like Levya's sarcastic comments. It'd be nice if there was a little more scenery description (what the boat looks like, etc.) but all the same, this is a great story. Update soon!
12/5/2004 c1 Marilda24
Wow, interesting story so far.^^ Levya is a really tough captain. Wonder what'll happen next^^. XD Think she accidently scared her next new crew mate. Please continue!
12/3/2004 c1 1You Make My Date
hahah awesome story- I loved the ending! And the naming was interesting- Poretto, Soretto, Irette, Orette, Uretta. Can't wait to see where this goes, so please update soon. And I'm crossing my fingers for a love-hate relationship or something equally spicey in romance later on!So, excellent work!Love,Carmen

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