for Nothing in Disguise11/12/2006 c1 
28Helen Cole
This is beautiful! I can really feel the way you care about this person and you portray your emotions very well. It's always so hard to see someone falling away when you know someone is up there who can take care of it- who is truly in control when we can't be. I love that! I just read a review you wrote me years ago about my lds poem and I read through it again and I see things from a whole new prospective than I did when I was so much younger. God doesn't make commandments to hold us back but to help us grow and lift us that much higher and keeping us out of undesirable situations or complications by doing what we know we ought to. I love Him and His son! I've always admired you since then, and you're love that you portray towards your Saviour. Keep it up! (I'd love for you to r&r my "I Testify")
28Helen ColeThis is beautiful! I can really feel the way you care about this person and you portray your emotions very well. It's always so hard to see someone falling away when you know someone is up there who can take care of it- who is truly in control when we can't be. I love that! I just read a review you wrote me years ago about my lds poem and I read through it again and I see things from a whole new prospective than I did when I was so much younger. God doesn't make commandments to hold us back but to help us grow and lift us that much higher and keeping us out of undesirable situations or complications by doing what we know we ought to. I love Him and His son! I've always admired you since then, and you're love that you portray towards your Saviour. Keep it up! (I'd love for you to r&r my "I Testify")
12/7/2004 c1 4Zeowolf
Hey, I read your poem, and I loved it. i was wondering, can I post this in my livejournal? I'll most definately keep the copywrite down at the bottom, and will in no way clame it as mine. But this poem describes how someone very close to me feels right now, and i want to put it up where she can come across it without me dumping it in her lap. would you mind? thanks so much.~STEPH
4ZeowolfHey, I read your poem, and I loved it. i was wondering, can I post this in my livejournal? I'll most definately keep the copywrite down at the bottom, and will in no way clame it as mine. But this poem describes how someone very close to me feels right now, and i want to put it up where she can come across it without me dumping it in her lap. would you mind? thanks so much.~STEPH
12/4/2004 c1 29Granite Claws
To be blunt, this is a beautiful poem. Maybe part of the reason I enjoy it so much is because I am exactly like the person its about... T-T''
29Granite ClawsTo be blunt, this is a beautiful poem. Maybe part of the reason I enjoy it so much is because I am exactly like the person its about... T-T''
12/3/2004 c1 myno
hm, interesting format, and i really like the last couple stanzas. I don't like the rhyming much though.
hm, interesting format, and i really like the last couple stanzas. I don't like the rhyming much though.