for Paper Hearts2/26/2006 c1 SHAKESPEER
THIS IS THE GREATEST EVER...
THIS IS THE GREATEST EVER...
9/26/2005 c1 ThisCutUpAngel
An interesting piece, but I love the title. The imagery is wonderful, and leaves me wanting something, but I'm not sure what. . .Well done! By the way, thank you for the review!
An interesting piece, but I love the title. The imagery is wonderful, and leaves me wanting something, but I'm not sure what. . .Well done! By the way, thank you for the review!
2/8/2005 c1 
45Simple Enigma
WOW! Uber good, I was kind of indifferent to it at first but the last line was like a bomb being dropped on my head and I had to read it again so I could apreciate the whole thing better. Anyhoo, really nice poem!
45Simple EnigmaWOW! Uber good, I was kind of indifferent to it at first but the last line was like a bomb being dropped on my head and I had to read it again so I could apreciate the whole thing better. Anyhoo, really nice poem!
2/7/2005 c1 GoBsNgObsOfGlUe
Abtract. But cool. o.0
Abtract. But cool. o.0
1/19/2005 c1 25JRVillers
Scar tissue still holding it’s grudge,
that line is a poem on its owngreat damn work
25JRVillersScar tissue still holding it’s grudge,
that line is a poem on its owngreat damn work
1/1/2005 c1 64not sure yet
i like this a lot, really love that last part, interesting mood that it gave off, it really caught my interest, nicely done
64not sure yeti like this a lot, really love that last part, interesting mood that it gave off, it really caught my interest, nicely done
12/28/2004 c1 9Rainbow Dreams42
I like muchly. *nods* It's kind of morbid, but in a good way. The imagery is really great! Keep it up!
9Rainbow Dreams42I like muchly. *nods* It's kind of morbid, but in a good way. The imagery is really great! Keep it up!
12/9/2004 c1 74Etheral
This is so beautiful! Wonderful! I'd pick a favorite line, but I can't! Great job!
74EtheralThis is so beautiful! Wonderful! I'd pick a favorite line, but I can't! Great job!
12/8/2004 c1 45Sammy- B
wow-so good.
you make me jealous!
but you really are an awesome writer, keep it up!
45Sammy- Bwow-so good.
you make me jealous!
but you really are an awesome writer, keep it up!
12/5/2004 c1 hushedcoldicefears
Hey,
I like it. I like the lines:
"Scar tissue still holding it's grudge,And the years have long since obscuredThe passion of those words."
Keep up the good work. ;)Thanks for the review too. ;)
~ HushedcoldIceColdFears
Hey,
I like it. I like the lines:
"Scar tissue still holding it's grudge,And the years have long since obscuredThe passion of those words."
Keep up the good work. ;)Thanks for the review too. ;)
~ HushedcoldIceColdFears
12/5/2004 c1 sgshs
cool, it's quite abstract. Great imagery in there. I especially like these lines:
And the years have long since obscuredThe passion of those words.
well done, I think I'll go check out your other stuff.
cool, it's quite abstract. Great imagery in there. I especially like these lines:
And the years have long since obscuredThe passion of those words.
well done, I think I'll go check out your other stuff.