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5/25/2005 c1 Cedric Quilfeather
Intriguing beginning. I'd like to see its growth from this point onward.
5/13/2005 c1 156ShadowPharoh
it sounds like a good start. it leads the reader on. it was short, are you continuing? i look foreward to the first chapter. ^_^

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12/5/2004 c1 6MrFlames
A chronically late character is not only one of the most cliche character traits, but its one of the most cliche ways to start a story. As such, your story jars me and makes me want to stop reading after three sentences.
12/5/2004 c1 31Shadow Gryphon
Oh? Interesting beginning... more!Gryph

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