12/6/2004 c1 kiki
this was a cool paragraph! lots of detail- good! not much written- bad! makes people dream and think- good! needing to start the story or show a relationship with the plot line of this will-be story- bad!
in other words, i think your good at writing so far, but u need to start writing something about the story already! ok, it's only been a day, but u should get started soon, or atleast put a little something in! otherwise people won't start looking at it. i usually only look at stories that are atleast already 80 words long, but for yours, i made a exception! SO FEEL LUCKY! please excuse me. now just start typing...cause i feel like this is a good story comin' on!
this was a cool paragraph! lots of detail- good! not much written- bad! makes people dream and think- good! needing to start the story or show a relationship with the plot line of this will-be story- bad!
in other words, i think your good at writing so far, but u need to start writing something about the story already! ok, it's only been a day, but u should get started soon, or atleast put a little something in! otherwise people won't start looking at it. i usually only look at stories that are atleast already 80 words long, but for yours, i made a exception! SO FEEL LUCKY! please excuse me. now just start typing...cause i feel like this is a good story comin' on!