for Ambiguity7/24/2013 c1 lovingyourstory
actually... that was pretty amazing... i would like to write more, but besides the fact that im considering to get an acc just so i can fave your stories..what else is there to say?
actually... that was pretty amazing... i would like to write more, but besides the fact that im considering to get an acc just so i can fave your stories..what else is there to say?
1/6/2012 c1 LavenderConviction
As short as this was, i still found it wonderful. I admire your skills as an author. I think a multi-chaptered story on this would actually be pretty cool.
As short as this was, i still found it wonderful. I admire your skills as an author. I think a multi-chaptered story on this would actually be pretty cool.
12/12/2010 c1 XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
this was so funny.
the "voice" or the voice of her friend is very amusing.
this was so funny.
the "voice" or the voice of her friend is very amusing.
11/18/2010 c1 
3michellemybelle
This was cute, subtle. It was almost sad, in a way-what if she's wrong? What if that's not the reason he's sending the cards? ...Aw. :D
3michellemybelleThis was cute, subtle. It was almost sad, in a way-what if she's wrong? What if that's not the reason he's sending the cards? ...Aw. :D
1/19/2010 c1 Penpaperaser
The interview style is seriously creative. I love the way it starts, the way you lead your readers through the expertly woven web of the story, and the end is just... wow.
The interview style is seriously creative. I love the way it starts, the way you lead your readers through the expertly woven web of the story, and the end is just... wow.
10/4/2009 c1 7thepiemaster
That was so entertaining to read. I don't quite get the ending. I'll reflect on it later. Props for making me laugh :D
7thepiemasterThat was so entertaining to read. I don't quite get the ending. I'll reflect on it later. Props for making me laugh :D
5/22/2009 c1 chocolateandbananas
i found this story really amusing ;D
think about all the holidays.
i love the originality of this story. torturing someone with greeting cards? i love the idea of it! maybe i should try it with someone some time ..
haha.
anyway, thanks for sharing your story. keep up the good work :)
i found this story really amusing ;D
think about all the holidays.
i love the originality of this story. torturing someone with greeting cards? i love the idea of it! maybe i should try it with someone some time ..
haha.
anyway, thanks for sharing your story. keep up the good work :)
3/30/2009 c1 soaps'nsuds
LOLZ. i found it funny. this might actually be a nice start or middle or end of a story or mini story or whatever. you can still keep this for reference though. make a story that is in third person so you can keep this so that the readers would have a peek into the character's POV.
LOLZ. i found it funny. this might actually be a nice start or middle or end of a story or mini story or whatever. you can still keep this for reference though. make a story that is in third person so you can keep this so that the readers would have a peek into the character's POV.
3/18/2009 c1 1love and misadventures
Definitely random, but I like it!
Does he even send cards on Father's Day? :D
Haha, um... yeah.
Congrats for winning the SKoW thing, by the way. :)
1love and misadventuresDefinitely random, but I like it!
Does he even send cards on Father's Day? :D
Haha, um... yeah.
Congrats for winning the SKoW thing, by the way. :)
3/1/2009 c1 24Hope.flies
Thats so creative and amazing! I love the originality of it all, I mean it's not every day (or ever, really), that you read about a man torturing his ex girlfriend (assuming it's ex)with hallmark cards.
The character was wonderfully portrayed, and it seems so well developed that you've borrowed her from something else...
I love how the ending really makes you wonder what he did before the cards to make her never forget him...first love? did she lose it to him? What?
However, I think that was part of the story, so I don't want answers. Plus, I love how open ended it is. It lets you wonder and do something hardly ever done these days: think. Wonderful job writing! I love how creative and amazing and gifted you seem to be!
24Hope.fliesThats so creative and amazing! I love the originality of it all, I mean it's not every day (or ever, really), that you read about a man torturing his ex girlfriend (assuming it's ex)with hallmark cards.
The character was wonderfully portrayed, and it seems so well developed that you've borrowed her from something else...
I love how the ending really makes you wonder what he did before the cards to make her never forget him...first love? did she lose it to him? What?
However, I think that was part of the story, so I don't want answers. Plus, I love how open ended it is. It lets you wonder and do something hardly ever done these days: think. Wonderful job writing! I love how creative and amazing and gifted you seem to be!
12/21/2008 c1 7rainbowpuddle
WHOA, that last line blew me away!
It was a great ending line. It was also a good cliff hanger. (sigh) I wish there was more, and I wonder why they broke up . .
Great job on the story. You are an amazing writer.
7rainbowpuddleWHOA, that last line blew me away!
It was a great ending line. It was also a good cliff hanger. (sigh) I wish there was more, and I wonder why they broke up . .
Great job on the story. You are an amazing writer.