for Beautiful12/15/2004 c1 
11mrs.shigwa.cobain
Wow... at the risk of sounding redundant, this story was beautiful. It was very well written. The only thing I need to know is if there's more. The end, while sweet and nice imagery, was a weird place to stop because it doesn't seem like it's fully done yet, you know? That last line seemed to be opening up another thought, but it wasn't completed. Aside from that, this was lovely!
11mrs.shigwa.cobainWow... at the risk of sounding redundant, this story was beautiful. It was very well written. The only thing I need to know is if there's more. The end, while sweet and nice imagery, was a weird place to stop because it doesn't seem like it's fully done yet, you know? That last line seemed to be opening up another thought, but it wasn't completed. Aside from that, this was lovely!
12/8/2004 c1 2Lovebird
That's a wonderful story. You capture moods better than any writer I've encountered, and so now, I'm jealous. Thanks a lot. :-P
Thank you for what you said about my story, by the way.
2LovebirdThat's a wonderful story. You capture moods better than any writer I've encountered, and so now, I'm jealous. Thanks a lot. :-P
Thank you for what you said about my story, by the way.
12/7/2004 c1 18Spanish Dreams
Wow. Just... wow. I'm waiting on another chapter. There better be another chapter.
I'd like to point out that your piece is well written and there are very few grammatical and spelling errors. Good plot as well.
18Spanish DreamsWow. Just... wow. I'm waiting on another chapter. There better be another chapter.
I'd like to point out that your piece is well written and there are very few grammatical and spelling errors. Good plot as well.