for Stop Being so Perceptive3/20/2005 c18 Daisy Decamps
Like the others said, this story was pretty entertaining, but it wasn't as unexpected as I thought it would be. And it was a bit rushed. Anyway, but overall, it was a good story and it kept me interested all the way through. congrats on finishing it. And if u have time, can u plz check out my finished story A Different Kind of Love?
Like the others said, this story was pretty entertaining, but it wasn't as unexpected as I thought it would be. And it was a bit rushed. Anyway, but overall, it was a good story and it kept me interested all the way through. congrats on finishing it. And if u have time, can u plz check out my finished story A Different Kind of Love?
3/20/2005 c13 Daisy Decamps
To be honest, I like Josh better than Trent, I think that's what you're trying to make the readers feel, and I'm feeling it. Sera and Josh! Sera and Josh! Sera and Josh!
To be honest, I like Josh better than Trent, I think that's what you're trying to make the readers feel, and I'm feeling it. Sera and Josh! Sera and Josh! Sera and Josh!
3/20/2005 c12 Daisy Decamps
aaw. The kiss. Even though that WAS pretty abrupt, but whatever! YAY! I'm really in the mood for this story today.
aaw. The kiss. Even though that WAS pretty abrupt, but whatever! YAY! I'm really in the mood for this story today.
3/20/2005 c11 Daisy Decamps
Wow. I'm so envious. Haven't gone out to do some good old shopping for a while now. But um, 10 dollars? ISn't that, um, too extreme?
Wow. I'm so envious. Haven't gone out to do some good old shopping for a while now. But um, 10 dollars? ISn't that, um, too extreme?
3/20/2005 c8 Daisy Decamps
Loved the humor so far, and the intimacy of ppl and I can just tell that they've known each other for a long time.
Loved the humor so far, and the intimacy of ppl and I can just tell that they've known each other for a long time.
3/18/2005 c18 books4me
Hey,
Great story. I thought it was a lot of fun!
The jump between chapters 16 and 17 was slightly large and unexpected, one could say, but I really enjoyed your piece anyway.
I'm surprised at how few reviews you've got, because it truly is entretaining!
Keep up the good work - any other stories sometime soon?
Thanks,
* Books4mE *
Hey,
Great story. I thought it was a lot of fun!
The jump between chapters 16 and 17 was slightly large and unexpected, one could say, but I really enjoyed your piece anyway.
I'm surprised at how few reviews you've got, because it truly is entretaining!
Keep up the good work - any other stories sometime soon?
Thanks,
* Books4mE *
12/19/2004 c17 rocky
yo friend! i likee! it turned out really good and i shall do the anime for you... o and by the way... Good Charlotte is so pop... now... metallica that is a different story... and good story... yeah... i think this review is over now... : luv ya, Rachee(Rocky)
yo friend! i likee! it turned out really good and i shall do the anime for you... o and by the way... Good Charlotte is so pop... now... metallica that is a different story... and good story... yeah... i think this review is over now... : luv ya, Rachee(Rocky)
12/8/2004 c17 
5fresianlady
wow. . .i think there should be a sequel for trent!it was amazing. . i cant believe he just let her go like that, hes such a sweet guy!i laughed soo hard when they met for the 1st time!update soon. . .well make a sequel!
5fresianladywow. . .i think there should be a sequel for trent!it was amazing. . i cant believe he just let her go like that, hes such a sweet guy!i laughed soo hard when they met for the 1st time!update soon. . .well make a sequel!