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6/2/2005 c1 LovelyLaura07
Hey Taylor it's Laura ! What's up? I love the poem as always! Visit my site if you have time!
3/20/2005 c1 aknightsgoldenrose
This reminded me of when I first started highschool. All my old friends were going to different schools and I didn't know anyone. This is probably my favorite poem out of all the ones you have written because I can really relate to it.
1/28/2005 c1 58Passage
hey, found you in the xanga blogring...nice poem...nicely worded
12/10/2004 c1 194Aslan Israel
Wow. That was awesome. really. The best thing I've read all day. Wonderful, wonderful job.
12/9/2004 c1 Laura
Personally, this is my fave of all of your poems.(all of them are great but this in my opinion is the best) I just like the flow and rhyming. It lets the reader into what you are experiences right now in beautiful lyrics. Keep writing and I miss you!~Laura
12/9/2004 c1 Laura
Your poem really 'moved' me lol. It was flowing and beautifully sad. You write really amzing poetry. Keep me posted for new poems. Again Great Job!
12/8/2004 c1 28my-vision
i wish you had ended the poem in a lighter sense, but i love how the rhythm and rhyme flow so smoothly. great! i know about moving too. :-)

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