for Invisible12/27/2004 c1 
55DarkPharaoh1666
When I review I always try to help some way. A word that is repeated over a time and again is Love. Now love, I cannot help you with, I don't know love. Nonetheless, wonderful write, once again. =) Oh, and when writer's block happens that means a big idea is on the way. Good luck. I hope your will Echo's be noticed. =)
55DarkPharaoh1666When I review I always try to help some way. A word that is repeated over a time and again is Love. Now love, I cannot help you with, I don't know love. Nonetheless, wonderful write, once again. =) Oh, and when writer's block happens that means a big idea is on the way. Good luck. I hope your will Echo's be noticed. =)
12/25/2004 c1 65AmaranthineMisery
that was wonderfully written... the emotions were conveyed well... keep writing
65AmaranthineMiserythat was wonderfully written... the emotions were conveyed well... keep writing
12/22/2004 c1 Oracular Echo
"I kiss you; can you taste it? / I love you; can you accept it?" How many abusive and physically and/or emotionally out of control relationships have there been in history? I know! Too many. A couple could appear to have a healthy relationship: they sleep together on a fairly regular basis, perhaps very regular, but it is empty. The love is needed for any kind of connection or REAL intimacy. So many people have felt this way. Very true theme, and you are daring to try out your writing with it. Some lines seemed a little awkward, but overall this is a good example of some good poetry/prose, although not my favorite of your works.
"I kiss you; can you taste it? / I love you; can you accept it?" How many abusive and physically and/or emotionally out of control relationships have there been in history? I know! Too many. A couple could appear to have a healthy relationship: they sleep together on a fairly regular basis, perhaps very regular, but it is empty. The love is needed for any kind of connection or REAL intimacy. So many people have felt this way. Very true theme, and you are daring to try out your writing with it. Some lines seemed a little awkward, but overall this is a good example of some good poetry/prose, although not my favorite of your works.
12/21/2004 c1 31Whatever-I-Say
Great poem...I love the emotion you put into this, wow, it's been such long time since I’ve felt the way you have in this poem...anyway keep writing!
31Whatever-I-SayGreat poem...I love the emotion you put into this, wow, it's been such long time since I’ve felt the way you have in this poem...anyway keep writing!
12/11/2004 c1 51Keith Andrew
This is rather beautiful and well written as well. Well done-Keith Andrew
51Keith AndrewThis is rather beautiful and well written as well. Well done-Keith Andrew
12/9/2004 c1 63InfiniteDreamer04
Get it nikki! this was awesome and i can relate. im sure u know why. (CURSE SARAH!)
anyways, good work!
63InfiniteDreamer04Get it nikki! this was awesome and i can relate. im sure u know why. (CURSE SARAH!)
anyways, good work!
12/8/2004 c1 7BeautifulEcho
Hi everybody! This is me, the author, and I hope you guys enjoy this poem. It's my first one up here, and i hope you like it! Please R&R! It would be a great help! Thanks! ~BeautifulEcho~
7BeautifulEchoHi everybody! This is me, the author, and I hope you guys enjoy this poem. It's my first one up here, and i hope you like it! Please R&R! It would be a great help! Thanks! ~BeautifulEcho~