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2/2/2006 c1 red rose
oh!

wat a poem mez! doing good, didnt know u was this talented, LOL got to give it u GAL.

SO detailed WAH WAH WAH!

LOL love u loadz and miss u all

Red rose
11/21/2005 c1 runa
im very impressed. in fact im kind of speechless.when i think of poem i usually assumes end of lines that rhyme but this was something different. i thought it was fab.for some reason there was some kind of immense feeling, full of confusion yet this person demands answers that they are scared to confront in a way.well thats my interpretation of it.i thought it was really good. keep up the hard work
11/21/2005 c1 amz
a well thought out and a 'full of meaning' poem. very deep and totally honest. it seems as though you're experiences in life have made you able to look at things with a mystical glint. very well opened, and really does capture the readers eye right to the end, which also makes them wonder about the mysteries of life. :-)
12/13/2004 c1 luvme
where the HELL do u get this talent.first the story now a poem o...i wonder wats next.

this poem is beautiful, very misteriouse. again keep it up. ur doing great.

love fromLuvme
12/10/2004 c1 shez
wow, well wat can i say, wothat was one heck of a long poem, but it was gudcongratz on all the effort u put in 2 it
12/10/2004 c1 1nisan
well done its lovely and just makes you think. the rhyming and word chose is well chosen
12/9/2004 c1 200Ashes of a Willow
wow, so long! I wish I could write long poems. *you did a great job. I like the ending, especially the last two lines. It's a very mature statement. Keep up the great work
12/9/2004 c1 Ishah
Hey Mez1, this is a great poem. So much better than mine.It has deep meaning to it and as a mystery attached to it as well.I love what the poem is based on and that it has greater meaning.It's like you're expressing your feelings in a unique way.This is your first poem and i think it is brill!Honestly i'm not just saying that for the sake of it, i truly mean it.I've been trying to write a poem similar to yours but alittle different too.Love this poem. Great try.Love~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Ishah ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

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