
12/23/2004 c1
18It's Time For Mystery Man
This is in response to the little temper tantrum you threw in a "review" of Crimson Snow. You say your stories are "way better than mine". I write about characters with personalities and actual intelligence. These so called "characters" in your stories just giggle and lurch through their cliché dialogue causing anyone with any intelligence to have an aneurism as they themselves suffer through the stories. Writing a story with an awful song by a one-hit wonder doesn't inspire me to think anything about it other than that it is awful. That was the review I gave because it is my honest opinion of the story. Sorry everyone can't compliment your writing and you can't take criticism.

This is in response to the little temper tantrum you threw in a "review" of Crimson Snow. You say your stories are "way better than mine". I write about characters with personalities and actual intelligence. These so called "characters" in your stories just giggle and lurch through their cliché dialogue causing anyone with any intelligence to have an aneurism as they themselves suffer through the stories. Writing a story with an awful song by a one-hit wonder doesn't inspire me to think anything about it other than that it is awful. That was the review I gave because it is my honest opinion of the story. Sorry everyone can't compliment your writing and you can't take criticism.
12/19/2004 c1
1KittyKittyKittenz
a note from one, who's been in love- thats AWESOME! I loved it! I hope you write more poetry!

a note from one, who's been in love- thats AWESOME! I loved it! I hope you write more poetry!
12/10/2004 c1
13Sir Whiteroses
A great poem, made espically to touch one's heart and soul
Sir Whiteroses' rating
* of 5

A great poem, made espically to touch one's heart and soul
Sir Whiteroses' rating
* of 5