for Consume Me11/21/2005 c1 
11les petits bateaux
I was curious when I read this poem. Was your character feeling depressed and she gave up battling against him and just surrendered, or had she no bounds to him and needed him to consume her...figuratively, speaking. Anyways, I love this, right from the start. Beautifully written.
~~Trinity
11les petits bateauxI was curious when I read this poem. Was your character feeling depressed and she gave up battling against him and just surrendered, or had she no bounds to him and needed him to consume her...figuratively, speaking. Anyways, I love this, right from the start. Beautifully written.
~~Trinity
8/24/2005 c1 28Hate In The Form Of Passion
This is the best erotic poem I've ever read. And I've read a lot of them. You capture the essence of submission and the lust one feels. Love this poem.
Alexiel
28Hate In The Form Of PassionThis is the best erotic poem I've ever read. And I've read a lot of them. You capture the essence of submission and the lust one feels. Love this poem.
Alexiel
8/14/2005 c1 32Kalpana Shahi
Hey, damn .. this is a very good one. So much emotions. So much feelings. So much desires. Keep on writing.
32Kalpana ShahiHey, damn .. this is a very good one. So much emotions. So much feelings. So much desires. Keep on writing.
3/24/2005 c1 romantic-flier
oh... i likey! i love that ending. 'Please, consume me'... it's just so... so... (falls over for thinking too hard)
oh... i likey! i love that ending. 'Please, consume me'... it's just so... so... (falls over for thinking too hard)
2/28/2005 c1 M L
Almost unreal. In real life it's the same. As they say, the submissive is the one in control.
Almost unreal. In real life it's the same. As they say, the submissive is the one in control.
2/14/2005 c1 23Confuzion in a Nutshell
wow, this is a very interesting poem. i like the desperation in it, and to me i get the implication of like, a double meaning in there maybe? n-e-way, really well written.
23Confuzion in a Nutshellwow, this is a very interesting poem. i like the desperation in it, and to me i get the implication of like, a double meaning in there maybe? n-e-way, really well written.
1/18/2005 c1 ruana but the sign in didn't appear to work
Fantastically beautiful piece,
Fantastically beautiful piece,
12/12/2004 c1 1Firestarter911
I like this. It's got a nice rythm to it and I like the way it doesn't need to rythm. THis is... How can I put this...? Kinky! :D
1Firestarter911I like this. It's got a nice rythm to it and I like the way it doesn't need to rythm. THis is... How can I put this...? Kinky! :D