for The Devil's Stradivarius12/30/2004 c1 
62graffiti-skies
im at a loss of words...love the angst in it! this is def goin on my favs!
62graffiti-skiesim at a loss of words...love the angst in it! this is def goin on my favs!
12/29/2004 c1 4IsisAvenger
This has to be your best piece! It is so good and so descriptive! When I read the title I immediately thought of that song "Devil Went Down to Geogia" for some reason, but it's true! First impressions are usually wrong...
4IsisAvengerThis has to be your best piece! It is so good and so descriptive! When I read the title I immediately thought of that song "Devil Went Down to Geogia" for some reason, but it's true! First impressions are usually wrong...
12/27/2004 c1 55DarkPharaoh1666
Wonderful write, the devil is a strange work of music isn't he?Well done.
55DarkPharaoh1666Wonderful write, the devil is a strange work of music isn't he?Well done.
12/22/2004 c1 8BadSweets
Dear BE,
Another excellent work! I absolutely love how you express yourself through the imagery, mood and tone of your work. I have no real suggestions, just research and look at tips out there for authors. Experiment with other forms and read other author's works. Subscribe to a Classical Poem newsletter on About.com (just search it on the site and it'll come up) and you'll get one of the classics daily. Through this, your writing will grow even more. Hmm, the concept seems very familiar though. I've atleast seen it on an animé called Yami No Matsuei (rather adult though, but who am I, of 15 years of age, to talk?). What was it inspired by?
Regards,~Sweets~
8BadSweetsDear BE,
Another excellent work! I absolutely love how you express yourself through the imagery, mood and tone of your work. I have no real suggestions, just research and look at tips out there for authors. Experiment with other forms and read other author's works. Subscribe to a Classical Poem newsletter on About.com (just search it on the site and it'll come up) and you'll get one of the classics daily. Through this, your writing will grow even more. Hmm, the concept seems very familiar though. I've atleast seen it on an animé called Yami No Matsuei (rather adult though, but who am I, of 15 years of age, to talk?). What was it inspired by?
Regards,~Sweets~
12/21/2004 c1 Oracular Echo
I play violin. *blink blink* This is an awesome poem. It had me frantically scrolling down to read more. I'm impressed. You should upload more of your writing on here. Plus we have similar pen names and that's just cool. :-)
I play violin. *blink blink* This is an awesome poem. It had me frantically scrolling down to read more. I'm impressed. You should upload more of your writing on here. Plus we have similar pen names and that's just cool. :-)
12/11/2004 c1 51Keith Andrew
Great work. Very interesting and the images were excellently porteayed. Keep it up-Keith Andrew
51Keith AndrewGreat work. Very interesting and the images were excellently porteayed. Keep it up-Keith Andrew
12/11/2004 c1 14opaline
Wonderful poem. There were a few lines that seemed out of place, but otherwise it really had a strange hateful aura about it; your expressions made it feel cold and disturbing, which is probably the sense you were trying to achieve, ergo, well done! Keep writing, whether its spooky stuff or not!One thing though - I don't think you're supposed to review your own poem. If you have an important note to tell your readers, it's better to do it at the end (or beginning) of the poem.Peace out.;)
14opalineWonderful poem. There were a few lines that seemed out of place, but otherwise it really had a strange hateful aura about it; your expressions made it feel cold and disturbing, which is probably the sense you were trying to achieve, ergo, well done! Keep writing, whether its spooky stuff or not!One thing though - I don't think you're supposed to review your own poem. If you have an important note to tell your readers, it's better to do it at the end (or beginning) of the poem.Peace out.;)
12/11/2004 c1 63InfiniteDreamer04
that was incredibly good! i hate u! i despise ur talent. haha, j/k. well anyways, good job!
keep on keepin' on
63InfiniteDreamer04that was incredibly good! i hate u! i despise ur talent. haha, j/k. well anyways, good job!
keep on keepin' on
12/11/2004 c1 7BeautifulEcho
Hi everybody! Jus wanted everyone to know that i play the violin, so it was kinda the inspiration for this poem. I'm second chair at my school, out of 20 so i'm pretty good. well i hope u liked it, bcuz i enjoyed writing it!
~BeautifulEcho~
7BeautifulEchoHi everybody! Jus wanted everyone to know that i play the violin, so it was kinda the inspiration for this poem. I'm second chair at my school, out of 20 so i'm pretty good. well i hope u liked it, bcuz i enjoyed writing it!
~BeautifulEcho~