for Van Helsing4/28/2005 c1 
3Nocte Animus
seems like an interesting start so far.
btw, yes, i am tolerant in such ways. Mice did live in my house at a time and I didn't care as long as they didn't bother me. In relavence toward the main topic here, to prosecute someone who's ways are different, when these ways have never effected you in any way, aside causing some fear as in the witch trials. Some may have been people that truely did deserve to be punished, and then there were others that were perhaps innocent. Nevertheless, one has not the right to unjustifiably claim another to be wrong because they don't share the same views on life. Strongly based religions have good ideas, but their leaders get so carried away and lose all tolerance for those who choose to do things their own way. Like a mouse, it lives it's life by searching for food. If a family of mice finds it's source of food in my house then, as long as they have no effect on my daily life then I will never mind it. It's tolerance, and the ability to be willing to share ideas, whether or not you agree.
3Nocte Animusseems like an interesting start so far.
btw, yes, i am tolerant in such ways. Mice did live in my house at a time and I didn't care as long as they didn't bother me. In relavence toward the main topic here, to prosecute someone who's ways are different, when these ways have never effected you in any way, aside causing some fear as in the witch trials. Some may have been people that truely did deserve to be punished, and then there were others that were perhaps innocent. Nevertheless, one has not the right to unjustifiably claim another to be wrong because they don't share the same views on life. Strongly based religions have good ideas, but their leaders get so carried away and lose all tolerance for those who choose to do things their own way. Like a mouse, it lives it's life by searching for food. If a family of mice finds it's source of food in my house then, as long as they have no effect on my daily life then I will never mind it. It's tolerance, and the ability to be willing to share ideas, whether or not you agree.
12/11/2004 c1 ffffffffffffffffffffffff
Strong plot, but the character development is a little off. Van Helsing's character is too bland, he's not really clarified. Good description of action, though, and I definitely enjoyed this story. WRITE MORE!
Strong plot, but the character development is a little off. Van Helsing's character is too bland, he's not really clarified. Good description of action, though, and I definitely enjoyed this story. WRITE MORE!