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12/11/2004 c1 123456789gone
This poem is actually very difficult to review. I've read it a couple of times now and I am still rather impressed.

Such wonderful phrasing and imagery, powerful repetitions and thought provoking metaphors.

As you said, you haven't really focused on form. Or punctuation for that matter. It would help the reader, but still. Wow.

Great stuff.

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