
7/26/2005 c1 Kalle
AW. So thoughtful. You Rock Lary! I luv ya babe! WE! WHEN DO COME BACK!Kalle
AW. So thoughtful. You Rock Lary! I luv ya babe! WE! WHEN DO COME BACK!Kalle
4/23/2005 c1 kalle
I love it! it be so sweet, You ROCK Celary! oh wait u be now Raz! Oh well! I luv ya! Kalle
I love it! it be so sweet, You ROCK Celary! oh wait u be now Raz! Oh well! I luv ya! Kalle
4/14/2005 c1
4recreated
I know you wanted me to read your other story, and I'm really excited to get on that...but I saw this summary and I love love love stories about the Trojan war. This was so good! That last part: I was:A soldier at TroyI was: Nothing
That gave me the shivers. That was amazingly well written. Oh gosh I love it!

I know you wanted me to read your other story, and I'm really excited to get on that...but I saw this summary and I love love love stories about the Trojan war. This was so good! That last part: I was:A soldier at TroyI was: Nothing
That gave me the shivers. That was amazingly well written. Oh gosh I love it!
12/12/2004 c1 Ushi
Love it. The description of dying interweaving with his memories, and the sudden epiphany. His pain is very vivid, very real.
Also, I can find a whole lot of parallels with today. Good universal 'war sucks' message.
And the ending? Just right.
Love it. The description of dying interweaving with his memories, and the sudden epiphany. His pain is very vivid, very real.
Also, I can find a whole lot of parallels with today. Good universal 'war sucks' message.
And the ending? Just right.