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7/26/2005 c1 Kalle
AW. So thoughtful. You Rock Lary! I luv ya babe! WE! WHEN DO COME BACK!Kalle
4/23/2005 c1 kalle
I love it! it be so sweet, You ROCK Celary! oh wait u be now Raz! Oh well! I luv ya! Kalle
4/22/2005 c1 1Infinite Abyss
Great poem.
4/14/2005 c1 4recreated
I know you wanted me to read your other story, and I'm really excited to get on that...but I saw this summary and I love love love stories about the Trojan war. This was so good! That last part: I was:A soldier at TroyI was: Nothing

That gave me the shivers. That was amazingly well written. Oh gosh I love it!
12/12/2004 c1 Ushi
Love it. The description of dying interweaving with his memories, and the sudden epiphany. His pain is very vivid, very real.

Also, I can find a whole lot of parallels with today. Good universal 'war sucks' message.

And the ending? Just right.

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