
1/22/2005 c1
173Dancinggal5389
deep and pretty, it sounded more like prose than poetry when read but it works that way too

deep and pretty, it sounded more like prose than poetry when read but it works that way too
12/29/2004 c1
4IsisAvenger
You have a real talent for writing, I don't know so much if it's poetry or not...I think I'd have to agree with another reviewer; you definitely write in prose and they're beautiful.

You have a real talent for writing, I don't know so much if it's poetry or not...I think I'd have to agree with another reviewer; you definitely write in prose and they're beautiful.
12/22/2004 c1
8BadSweets
Dear Beautiful Echo,
A beautiful echo, indeed! I really loved this poem, it was so sincere and showed your emotions so well. And you're only 13! (read your profile)Speaking of your profile, you're planning to go to Oxford and major in English Lit., huh? That's an excellent dream. I currently live in London and I've visited the Cambridge Uni campus; 'twas awesome.It's great you know what you want so early! Research it as much as possible. You might need some English qualifications such as GCSEs and A-levels to give you an added edge. Good luck with that! I see that you're well on your way with your dream.
Regards,~Sweets~

Dear Beautiful Echo,
A beautiful echo, indeed! I really loved this poem, it was so sincere and showed your emotions so well. And you're only 13! (read your profile)Speaking of your profile, you're planning to go to Oxford and major in English Lit., huh? That's an excellent dream. I currently live in London and I've visited the Cambridge Uni campus; 'twas awesome.It's great you know what you want so early! Research it as much as possible. You might need some English qualifications such as GCSEs and A-levels to give you an added edge. Good luck with that! I see that you're well on your way with your dream.
Regards,~Sweets~
12/12/2004 c1
132mizu no kokoro
Aw... that was such a sweet poem! ^^lovely~it all seemed to flow so well~ great work!keep writing!

Aw... that was such a sweet poem! ^^lovely~it all seemed to flow so well~ great work!keep writing!
12/12/2004 c1
63InfiniteDreamer04
good job miznikki. for some reason i liked the line about a love drunk fool.
KEEP ON KEEPIN' ON
~MizzThang04

good job miznikki. for some reason i liked the line about a love drunk fool.
KEEP ON KEEPIN' ON
~MizzThang04
12/12/2004 c1
7BeautifulEcho
Sorry about the way the poem is lined up, I tried to fix it atleast 3 times, but o well. Opaline if u are reviewing this again, sorry for reviewing my own poem! lol. hope u all like it!
~BeautifulEcho~

Sorry about the way the poem is lined up, I tried to fix it atleast 3 times, but o well. Opaline if u are reviewing this again, sorry for reviewing my own poem! lol. hope u all like it!
~BeautifulEcho~