for Death into Life12/19/2004 c1 
20Rimbaud's Whore
I'd love if you added some length to it, explained soem of the emotions. The last two lines feel like they need to be qualified a little. That said, I enjoyed reading thi, I thgink you use of line was wonderful and the iamgery was lovely.
20Rimbaud's WhoreI'd love if you added some length to it, explained soem of the emotions. The last two lines feel like they need to be qualified a little. That said, I enjoyed reading thi, I thgink you use of line was wonderful and the iamgery was lovely.