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3/1/2005 c1 23HeadofVecna
Maybe its all just intentional for casual effect, but I thought the lack of capitalization and awkward phrasing e.g. "thank you not" was offputting and disrupted the flow. I thought the line breaks were interesting, but lacked a particular construction. Not enlightening, but insightful.
1/23/2005 c1 102Joewhatever
Nice write. I liked it.
12/23/2004 c1 90poetic abortion
I'm sorry. I'm sorry. I'm sorry. I'm sorry. I'm sorry. . I forgot all about your review. ;.;

*.* This was really good. =) Keep it up.

~ Noelle ~
12/22/2004 c1 9Kalopsia
interesting poem. i will be honest-i didnt really understand it one bit. but what i did get out of it i liked.

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