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12/20/2004 c1 130a duel of pens 111
AH! BIG WORDS!

funny though, i laughed.
12/13/2004 c1 10The flying spatula
It is cute! I like it!
12/13/2004 c1 Bekket
Wow, very scientific. That was cool. You may want to warn people in your summary that younger children may not understand the scientific terms concering atoms molecuals and compounds. Only one thing. Make your begining a little longer and describe the sceen a bit more clearly. The story gets into full swing to quickly. You need to be more descriptive in your writing a write a little more or leave space for another chapter to build more suspense. Apart fom that well done!

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