
3/27/2005 c1 Vince
Interesting ^^ very vivid descriptions
Interesting ^^ very vivid descriptions
12/19/2004 c2
41Silver Phoenix Falling
I love the imagery! Great use of words. In "Decimation," especially, the image you painted sent a shiver down my spine. Simply beautiful!

I love the imagery! Great use of words. In "Decimation," especially, the image you painted sent a shiver down my spine. Simply beautiful!
12/13/2004 c1 yayya
how borin
how borin
12/13/2004 c1 Beau
Good use of vocabulary and your rhythm pentameter is very unique
Echoes of Lord Byron
Very unique and quite good
improvements:
none
you seem to jump around a lot within each sonnet
maybe that's the effect you're going for?
over all quite good
Good use of vocabulary and your rhythm pentameter is very unique
Echoes of Lord Byron
Very unique and quite good
improvements:
none
you seem to jump around a lot within each sonnet
maybe that's the effect you're going for?
over all quite good
12/13/2004 c1 Natalie
woot! thats really good! its very descriptive! i like that a lot! it really makes you want to go outside and look to see everything you described! awsomeness!much love!Natles
woot! thats really good! its very descriptive! i like that a lot! it really makes you want to go outside and look to see everything you described! awsomeness!much love!Natles
12/13/2004 c1
7Living on Dreams
Hey Danielle-chan! ^^
Curse that 11th line and my lack of ability to produce proper syllabic poetry -.-...
But the poem is awesome! I love rengas ^^! Yay rengas! This is such a cute poem! Keep writing! Love ya!
~Missa-chan

Hey Danielle-chan! ^^
Curse that 11th line and my lack of ability to produce proper syllabic poetry -.-...
But the poem is awesome! I love rengas ^^! Yay rengas! This is such a cute poem! Keep writing! Love ya!
~Missa-chan