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3/30/2005 c5 612simpleplan13
ncie poem & he is an awesome writer
3/30/2005 c4 simpleplan13
so true and great question
3/27/2005 c1 Vince
Interesting ^^ very vivid descriptions
3/27/2005 c3 simpleplan13
very powerful... I love the whole Sin thing
12/20/2004 c1 23Nothing Profound
Me like
12/19/2004 c2 41Silver Phoenix Falling
I love the imagery! Great use of words. In "Decimation," especially, the image you painted sent a shiver down my spine. Simply beautiful!
12/13/2004 c1 yayya
how borin
12/13/2004 c1 Beau
Good use of vocabulary and your rhythm pentameter is very unique

Echoes of Lord Byron

Very unique and quite good



you seem to jump around a lot within each sonnet

maybe that's the effect you're going for?

over all quite good
12/13/2004 c1 Natalie
woot! thats really good! its very descriptive! i like that a lot! it really makes you want to go outside and look to see everything you described! awsomeness!much love!Natles
12/13/2004 c1 7Living on Dreams
Hey Danielle-chan! ^^

Curse that 11th line and my lack of ability to produce proper syllabic poetry -.-...

But the poem is awesome! I love rengas ^^! Yay rengas! This is such a cute poem! Keep writing! Love ya!


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