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10/28/2008 c1 
3ElectricGoat
really great poem. i like the structure and scheme of it. i also liked that you didn't use whole sentences, but rather descriptive words to show us what you were saying. great job.
3ElectricGoatreally great poem. i like the structure and scheme of it. i also liked that you didn't use whole sentences, but rather descriptive words to show us what you were saying. great job.
4/13/2007 c1 6songs-frog-life13
this is so sad. but cool at the smae time. thanks for reviewing my story. i like your work! what do you think of the Da Vinci Code? just wondering. ~13
6songs-frog-life13this is so sad. but cool at the smae time. thanks for reviewing my story. i like your work! what do you think of the Da Vinci Code? just wondering. ~13
4/27/2006 c1 124in theory
Beauty, abstract simplistic-ness Ooh words fail. The shape is gorgeous too.
124in theoryBeauty, abstract simplistic-ness Ooh words fail. The shape is gorgeous too.
1/7/2006 c1 J.E.Wyatt
wow...just...wow...I just read this in a few seconds...but had to reread it again...wow...WOW. Like seriously...wow, I have no other way to express it. As I read the bottom word "myth" I felt as if I was like..put into some magic spell. I can't really catch the meaning of this poem, but...it's magical...in some..uncomrephensible and vague way! BRAVO!
wow...just...wow...I just read this in a few seconds...but had to reread it again...wow...WOW. Like seriously...wow, I have no other way to express it. As I read the bottom word "myth" I felt as if I was like..put into some magic spell. I can't really catch the meaning of this poem, but...it's magical...in some..uncomrephensible and vague way! BRAVO!
12/28/2005 c1 5Raspberry Twirl
that was beautiful! such a delicate, secret, mysterious image you created. i'm adding this to my favorite list!
The virgin blue is one of my favorite books too! The lady and the unicorn was great as well. Tracy Chevalier is awesome, huh?
5Raspberry Twirlthat was beautiful! such a delicate, secret, mysterious image you created. i'm adding this to my favorite list!
The virgin blue is one of my favorite books too! The lady and the unicorn was great as well. Tracy Chevalier is awesome, huh?
10/21/2005 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
Deep, and well-detailed, I loved it, keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietDeep, and well-detailed, I loved it, keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.
3/30/2005 c1 Mina Carlisle
I rather liked that. It's short and sweet but the words you use are rather catching. I like it a lot. Also, thank you for reviewing Farmer's Daughter! I appreciate it and congrats on the poem, it's terrific!
I rather liked that. It's short and sweet but the words you use are rather catching. I like it a lot. Also, thank you for reviewing Farmer's Daughter! I appreciate it and congrats on the poem, it's terrific!
2/20/2005 c1 1o0oAnnie
Very cool poem..it was mostly adjectives but I really liked it..even the format if cool and the way it appears and I've never read a poem about mermaides but this one is cool...keep writing!
1o0oAnnieVery cool poem..it was mostly adjectives but I really liked it..even the format if cool and the way it appears and I've never read a poem about mermaides but this one is cool...keep writing!
1/21/2005 c1 10Nova-Janna
Great example of a diamante poem, I never could get those right...I was forwarded here by your sister, and I think I like both your work equally. Good job, off I go to read more.
10Nova-JannaGreat example of a diamante poem, I never could get those right...I was forwarded here by your sister, and I think I like both your work equally. Good job, off I go to read more.
1/9/2005 c1 myno
cool format. I love the way it lists all the characteristics of a mermaid and such, and then ends on the word myth.
cool format. I love the way it lists all the characteristics of a mermaid and such, and then ends on the word myth.
12/14/2004 c1 3Eternity's Lyre
I've seen this form of poetry on several occasions: once, when in the middle of my 7th grade English class, another time in 4th grade, and finally when I was about 7 years old. There's nothing wrong with the form, honestly, but there's so much more one can do with the language that it takes something truly spectacular to be able to win attention with the restraints of the "Diamante" as you call it. To be honest, I don't know where you got your opinions of the scale-tailed ladies of the liquid empire, but they don't seem very Disney to me, or familiar in any other form. Your adjectives and various other words also tend to lean a bit more on the vague side than the mind-jarringly vivid side, hinting at a possible polishing by way of a thesaurus if nothing else. I also can't tell if you've got some deep meaning within this poem you want to tell the world, and it's likely there isn't, which is to some extent deleterious to the work. If I can read something and synonyms repeatedly attack my consciousness, it means (at least to my eyes) the words weren't poignant just yet.
An aficionado's appreciation goes out to you.
3Eternity's LyreI've seen this form of poetry on several occasions: once, when in the middle of my 7th grade English class, another time in 4th grade, and finally when I was about 7 years old. There's nothing wrong with the form, honestly, but there's so much more one can do with the language that it takes something truly spectacular to be able to win attention with the restraints of the "Diamante" as you call it. To be honest, I don't know where you got your opinions of the scale-tailed ladies of the liquid empire, but they don't seem very Disney to me, or familiar in any other form. Your adjectives and various other words also tend to lean a bit more on the vague side than the mind-jarringly vivid side, hinting at a possible polishing by way of a thesaurus if nothing else. I also can't tell if you've got some deep meaning within this poem you want to tell the world, and it's likely there isn't, which is to some extent deleterious to the work. If I can read something and synonyms repeatedly attack my consciousness, it means (at least to my eyes) the words weren't poignant just yet.
An aficionado's appreciation goes out to you.
12/14/2004 c1 74laughter at the funeral
this is really nice...i just love sirens...good job...oh and by the way...i have a poem with this kind of theme...it's entitled siren's lullaby...pls do check it out...truly yours...serene-rhapsody
74laughter at the funeralthis is really nice...i just love sirens...good job...oh and by the way...i have a poem with this kind of theme...it's entitled siren's lullaby...pls do check it out...truly yours...serene-rhapsody