for Music10/27/2009 c5 
4HighOnBrokenWings
Really good. For some reason the short little chapters really suit the way that this story is written, and it's written really well :D There was one mistake I spotted, but... I forgot what that was :D
You should really update this!
4HighOnBrokenWingsReally good. For some reason the short little chapters really suit the way that this story is written, and it's written really well :D There was one mistake I spotted, but... I forgot what that was :D
You should really update this!
10/27/2009 c1 HighOnBrokenWings
M. Intriguing first little prologuey thing. Its very thought capturing, and makes me want to read more, so I think I will :D
M. Intriguing first little prologuey thing. Its very thought capturing, and makes me want to read more, so I think I will :D
6/7/2005 c5 Anonymous
This is a good story, albeit the chapters are short. Maybe combining them would make them longer, and make the actual story seem longer when you read it. (Only a suggestion though).
This is a good story, albeit the chapters are short. Maybe combining them would make them longer, and make the actual story seem longer when you read it. (Only a suggestion though).
12/15/2004 c2 8black unicorn33
i love the idea of watching songs being written and wondering who the inspiration is. please write more
8black unicorn33i love the idea of watching songs being written and wondering who the inspiration is. please write more