
1/1/2005 c1
10Quid
That was weird. 'Random Person in the Room. The shiny! It burns! (Claps hands to eyes and passes out.)' I liked that line. Very interesting start.

That was weird. 'Random Person in the Room. The shiny! It burns! (Claps hands to eyes and passes out.)' I liked that line. Very interesting start.
12/31/2004 c1 D
AW How sweet, You remembered to give credit where credit was due. Thanks L. And it is good, though your drawsing are much more descriptive. Tee-hee, Oh for anyone who reads the comments here is the scoop, I created the wonderful and mutiple-personality char of Merin/ Skitsophie. J created Rhea, an L(pico the great) screated the mysterious figure in the corner, the bartender, and Armory. I hope you enjoy are creation and will read the next section of chapter one.
... Oh and since J hasn't done chapter 3 I will be tending to that along with chapter 7, I hope you enjoy the script.
AW How sweet, You remembered to give credit where credit was due. Thanks L. And it is good, though your drawsing are much more descriptive. Tee-hee, Oh for anyone who reads the comments here is the scoop, I created the wonderful and mutiple-personality char of Merin/ Skitsophie. J created Rhea, an L(pico the great) screated the mysterious figure in the corner, the bartender, and Armory. I hope you enjoy are creation and will read the next section of chapter one.
... Oh and since J hasn't done chapter 3 I will be tending to that along with chapter 7, I hope you enjoy the script.
12/21/2004 c1
38Shinji Boi69
I felt kinda slow at the beginning but ok. You were like, "Blood, death, and violence" I was like, "OH Cool!" then you were like, "now I've got your attention. I felt really sloiw. Oh well, anyway, good job. I really liked this. Keep up the good work.~shinji

I felt kinda slow at the beginning but ok. You were like, "Blood, death, and violence" I was like, "OH Cool!" then you were like, "now I've got your attention. I felt really sloiw. Oh well, anyway, good job. I really liked this. Keep up the good work.~shinji
12/16/2004 c1
22Loki Mischeif-Maker
Yes we're curious. And amused. I like the whole personality change thing - and the Skits's name - kinda reminds me of the word Skitsophrenic, if that's whatwas intended.
Hm . . . your character . . . probably whichever one is shortest, though you haven't told us that yet . . . .
Okay, nuff ranting, still laughing. Update Soon!
Cheers!

Yes we're curious. And amused. I like the whole personality change thing - and the Skits's name - kinda reminds me of the word Skitsophrenic, if that's whatwas intended.
Hm . . . your character . . . probably whichever one is shortest, though you haven't told us that yet . . . .
Okay, nuff ranting, still laughing. Update Soon!
Cheers!
12/16/2004 c1
13Rhea De'Aqua
I know your character. MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!Anyway, Like the script very, very much.Needs more detail though, and whats up w/the weird neaklace? It's not weird. It's ... oh. I see.Anyway, very good job.

I know your character. MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!Anyway, Like the script very, very much.Needs more detail though, and whats up w/the weird neaklace? It's not weird. It's ... oh. I see.Anyway, very good job.
12/15/2004 c1
2Oni Starwind
Great! I like the idea of you and friends making a manga. Guess what me and my school friends are doing the same thing ecept were fresh mens. Check out my manga in my profile it's called Limit Breaker triolgy.
I give your manga a 9 out 10.

Great! I like the idea of you and friends making a manga. Guess what me and my school friends are doing the same thing ecept were fresh mens. Check out my manga in my profile it's called Limit Breaker triolgy.
I give your manga a 9 out 10.