for That feeling you get when the wind is changing4/24/2008 c1 
8Written
I used to live in the middle east and I never really thought of it as a home until I left.
I was in the middle east again last summer, and I remember sitting on the burning hot pavement and really reveling in the feeling. the smell of it was what I missed the most.
thanks for writing this. I really miss it, but reading this makes me feel a little bit better.
8WrittenI used to live in the middle east and I never really thought of it as a home until I left.
I was in the middle east again last summer, and I remember sitting on the burning hot pavement and really reveling in the feeling. the smell of it was what I missed the most.
thanks for writing this. I really miss it, but reading this makes me feel a little bit better.
8/12/2006 c1 5Lotos-eater
You have a beautiful way of painting a picture with words, and your memory is priceless. You should write more stories set back home.
5Lotos-eaterYou have a beautiful way of painting a picture with words, and your memory is priceless. You should write more stories set back home.
9/15/2005 c1 55ronshaberry
This is really touching. So true. So real, it hurts. In a good way. To make the little in life the most important, what a great thing... My gosh, I sound so... Anyway, the style is great! There are a couple grammatical errors here and there... If you read it through you should be able to find them. Or it.
About your review, I have not read either of the books... They sound interesting. ^_^x I just thought that it would be an interesting topic to explore.. you know? And... I write however I feel my subject should be written, so my style varies a bit. ^.^x
Thank you for the review, anyway!
55ronshaberryThis is really touching. So true. So real, it hurts. In a good way. To make the little in life the most important, what a great thing... My gosh, I sound so... Anyway, the style is great! There are a couple grammatical errors here and there... If you read it through you should be able to find them. Or it.
About your review, I have not read either of the books... They sound interesting. ^_^x I just thought that it would be an interesting topic to explore.. you know? And... I write however I feel my subject should be written, so my style varies a bit. ^.^x
Thank you for the review, anyway!
5/7/2005 c1 5Cyclonica
That is so beautiful. It's like it's out of a fantasy novel, and you say these things still exist today? And that we're making war on them? God... we really suck, don't we. This needs to be published or something because no one knows about this stuff. The mass of men think of the Middle East as a dirty desert and they don't even deign to think about the cultures that have survived there for countless decades. No, see, you can see when I'm moved because I get all soap-boxy. This is so fabulous.
5CyclonicaThat is so beautiful. It's like it's out of a fantasy novel, and you say these things still exist today? And that we're making war on them? God... we really suck, don't we. This needs to be published or something because no one knows about this stuff. The mass of men think of the Middle East as a dirty desert and they don't even deign to think about the cultures that have survived there for countless decades. No, see, you can see when I'm moved because I get all soap-boxy. This is so fabulous.