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8/1/2005 c1 AC
So much emotion! brovo! this one has to be one of my favs! really! it's that good. i like depressing stuff and this one's kinda there and yet... it gets you to thinking... not all poems can do that. but yours do.
12/22/2004 c1 25pleasecometrue
Good write, I like it.
12/16/2004 c1 20Rimbaud's Whore
your sense of line was excellent, and some of your imagery was very good too. "Red rivulets run down your legs/ To pool beneath you/ Providing you with a reflection" this is such a powerful image, the last line praticularly conveying a sense of unease, and perhaps a dislocation ofr normal society. some of your phrase was a little cliched, for instance "blinded by the light of day", but mainly it was excellent.

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