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7/7/2005 c1 3The Proxy Ninja
Simple, sweet- clear and easy. And straight to the point without fooling me. Crisp, too. Well done. Especially the definition. My question is, in regards to the lines: so subtle, what I see there,/what may or may not/be there".. Is she having paranoid feelings about what he might think about her, after having shown him a part of her that she regretted showing? Or..
12/15/2004 c1 74A Perfect Sonnet
Nice structure and use of format, this was very effective.

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