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12/27/2004 c7 6iglooey
I really like your writing style. I think that you really know your stuff. Again, you put too much detail into every object. It would be great if you made this into a novel , you can put the people that you just described into a real story about yourself. It would actually be quite interesting. Um..try to be more diverse. I think the only people that you described are boys with braces, maybe talk about some of the girls or the teachers in your class. Well, good job.

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