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12/16/2004 c1 84Jaclyn
That shattered me.

That absolutely stole the breath from my body. Because, yes, I've been having trouble finishing poems/writing them at all lately...but that's because I've been writing more prose than usual...so I figured it was okay, it was because of that, it didn't matter...but I miss it, and yes, I must miss it even more than I realized because this poem shattered me.

Thank you. I'm honored to be at the center of something you wrote. *tight hug*

Oh, and also! The structure *really* works here. The statements interspersed with questions. Every stanza matters. The last one-two punch of a line is extremely effective.

Adding the poem to my faves :)
12/16/2004 c1 17wishes21
i do hope ur able to write again.. i do so love your poems!
12/15/2004 c1 2Paris-is-Waiting
thats so sad. the last line "not like before" makes me feel so depressed. I hope you regain what you think you've lost, because I can tell you, the words you've penned are elegant and eloquent, and really take form and meaning.

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