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Wow. If the Titanic could think/feel/etc., this would be what it feels like. Probably. Sure. Yeah. I've always been interested in the Titanic for many reasons, but one is that it sunk for such a stupid reason. Arrogance. That was pretty much what did her in.Anyway, great, if long, poem.
Wow. If the Titanic could think/feel/etc., this would be what it feels like. Probably. Sure. Yeah. I've always been interested in the Titanic for many reasons, but one is that it sunk for such a stupid reason. Arrogance. That was pretty much what did her in.Anyway, great, if long, poem.
1/27/2005 c1 
21Marth Azumi
Oh god, this was awesome, Star! The whole flow of it was great, and it was powerful and haunting at the same time. I really think you're good at poetry, much better than me, anyway. Nice job.
And remember, keep writing, when I finally get these damned midterms done I'll get to reading some of your kick-ass fantasy stories.
-Marth =D
21Marth AzumiOh god, this was awesome, Star! The whole flow of it was great, and it was powerful and haunting at the same time. I really think you're good at poetry, much better than me, anyway. Nice job.
And remember, keep writing, when I finally get these damned midterms done I'll get to reading some of your kick-ass fantasy stories.
-Marth =D
1/24/2005 c1 15MercuryMoon
haha awesomeness. I like your poetry. ^^ Very picturesque, although it's a bit choppy because of all the commas. The last line was really nice, too. ^^
15MercuryMoonhaha awesomeness. I like your poetry. ^^ Very picturesque, although it's a bit choppy because of all the commas. The last line was really nice, too. ^^
12/16/2004 c1 24Sarah-Brighteyes
Very beautiful. I loved the darkness of it. Seemed to catch my eye. Very nice poem.
24Sarah-BrighteyesVery beautiful. I loved the darkness of it. Seemed to catch my eye. Very nice poem.