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21princess max
That's so sad. Poor Tara.
On another note, I'm glad Marina stood up to Alina, but I seriously hope Alina doesn't do anything stupid. Maybe Shane could start liking her or something?
21princess maxThat's so sad. Poor Tara.
On another note, I'm glad Marina stood up to Alina, but I seriously hope Alina doesn't do anything stupid. Maybe Shane could start liking her or something?
1/30/2005 c29 16emerald raven
at least shannon knows where he went wrong now...me thinks that's gonna be a very long talk. me also thinks we need more of another journey! =P pwease update as soon as...
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Emerald RavenX x X
16emerald ravenat least shannon knows where he went wrong now...me thinks that's gonna be a very long talk. me also thinks we need more of another journey! =P pwease update as soon as...
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Emerald RavenX x X
1/27/2005 c29 Untitled Absence
refreshing, that's for sure. I liked what you did here, with making Shannon all but beg for forgiveness. I thought that was good...kudos!
refreshing, that's for sure. I liked what you did here, with making Shannon all but beg for forgiveness. I thought that was good...kudos!
1/27/2005 c29 21princess max
*grins* YES I was referring to you in my author notes ^_^ Now you get bickies for updating!
I like Shannon and Tara's relationship. It's not too perfect, and I like how they each have separate 'areas' where they dominate, and merge all these bits together. That makes no sense -_-
21princess max*grins* YES I was referring to you in my author notes ^_^ Now you get bickies for updating!
I like Shannon and Tara's relationship. It's not too perfect, and I like how they each have separate 'areas' where they dominate, and merge all these bits together. That makes no sense -_-
1/24/2005 c28 16emerald raven
yes shannon you did screw up - but at least he knows he did...jeff and eden...married...aw so sweet! and tony's a sweetie too! pwease try and updte soon! *begs* pwetty pwease!
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Emerald RavenX x X
16emerald ravenyes shannon you did screw up - but at least he knows he did...jeff and eden...married...aw so sweet! and tony's a sweetie too! pwease try and updte soon! *begs* pwetty pwease!
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Emerald RavenX x X
1/23/2005 c28 21princess max
Poor Tara, but *OH* poor Eden. Not knowing her age, that just hammers home how much she's been abused. I'm worried for both of them, but moreso Tara and hope Tony can help her through it. I like Tony, he's a very mature character and I don't know how many people could have done what he did to help Tara, and yet at the same time, be able to step back and accept that she was grieving (or whatever, I need to read the prequel), without feeling as though he was owed anything.
21princess maxPoor Tara, but *OH* poor Eden. Not knowing her age, that just hammers home how much she's been abused. I'm worried for both of them, but moreso Tara and hope Tony can help her through it. I like Tony, he's a very mature character and I don't know how many people could have done what he did to help Tara, and yet at the same time, be able to step back and accept that she was grieving (or whatever, I need to read the prequel), without feeling as though he was owed anything.
1/20/2005 c28 Untitled Absence
oh no, I hope Rio doesn't lose her focus when she fights...and I hope Jeff isn't really serious about marriage. If she's that young...hmm...well, it's good to she that you have updates again, despite the server problems that have been plaguing both ff.net and fp.net. this is certainly an intresting story to the bone. but...you've been neglecting another journey again...the baclstory to Rio is very important. it's like missing a bunch of chunks in a jigsaw puzzle
oh no, I hope Rio doesn't lose her focus when she fights...and I hope Jeff isn't really serious about marriage. If she's that young...hmm...well, it's good to she that you have updates again, despite the server problems that have been plaguing both ff.net and fp.net. this is certainly an intresting story to the bone. but...you've been neglecting another journey again...the baclstory to Rio is very important. it's like missing a bunch of chunks in a jigsaw puzzle
1/12/2005 c27 1Killer Tofu
I had read 'The Road Less Travelled' first before anything else, but I sure am glad that I found it. Your stories are great and inspiring. Keep up the kick ass work.
1Killer TofuI had read 'The Road Less Travelled' first before anything else, but I sure am glad that I found it. Your stories are great and inspiring. Keep up the kick ass work.
1/12/2005 c27 21princess max
Hey, I'm glad Tony came by just when she needed someone. The sad thing about Rio's mood is that she doesn't realise just how many people care about her.
21princess maxHey, I'm glad Tony came by just when she needed someone. The sad thing about Rio's mood is that she doesn't realise just how many people care about her.
1/12/2005 c27 Emerald Raven
aww! tony's back! yay! looks like shannons put his foot right in it now...*sigh* i loved the little bit of sven/justin going on! "...my lovely but thickheaded mate..." ^_^ i heart them - i'm an obsessive fan...*waves justin/sven flag*can we have another chapter soon? pwease! lol - i'm begging! *begs*
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Emerald RavenX x X
aww! tony's back! yay! looks like shannons put his foot right in it now...*sigh* i loved the little bit of sven/justin going on! "...my lovely but thickheaded mate..." ^_^ i heart them - i'm an obsessive fan...*waves justin/sven flag*can we have another chapter soon? pwease! lol - i'm begging! *begs*
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1/11/2005 c26 princess max
I am SO ridiculously happy! That's SO sweet and lovely and soppy and I'm going to gush on uselessly about how glad I am Jeff and Eden are together. I REALLY hope this was the breakthrough for Eden, and that Rio can sort out Serpentina without any nasty fighting.
I am SO ridiculously happy! That's SO sweet and lovely and soppy and I'm going to gush on uselessly about how glad I am Jeff and Eden are together. I REALLY hope this was the breakthrough for Eden, and that Rio can sort out Serpentina without any nasty fighting.
1/11/2005 c26 Emerald Raven
aw! they're so sweet! nora and todd...and jeff and eden...*sigh* sounds like shannon's not liking this plan at all...when can you get another chapter out? *bounces* i wanna know what comes next!
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Emerald RavenX x X
aw! they're so sweet! nora and todd...and jeff and eden...*sigh* sounds like shannon's not liking this plan at all...when can you get another chapter out? *bounces* i wanna know what comes next!
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1/10/2005 c25 princess max
YAY! Eden and Jeff get nookie! Poor Shannon, I feel for him, he must be so worried about Tara. I also kind of feel sorry for Serpentina. I have a hard time hating your characters.
YAY! Eden and Jeff get nookie! Poor Shannon, I feel for him, he must be so worried about Tara. I also kind of feel sorry for Serpentina. I have a hard time hating your characters.
1/9/2005 c24 princess max
Wow, so much happenning! I'm so glad things are looking up for Eden, although I'm a bit worried about the Serpentina/Rio match. Justin and Sven are too cute, although I still keep giggling whenever 'Sven' is referred to as 'Mum' (okay, 'Mom'. I can't get over the fact that Americans put an 'o' in, instead of a 'u' when it's a 'u' sound. At least with *our* accents it is^_^).
Also, I'm sorry for not reviewing earlier. My best friend had a bit of an emergency and she was staying with us for yonks. And crying. And driving my partner and our son up the wall with her histrionics, but that's women for you^_^
Wow, so much happenning! I'm so glad things are looking up for Eden, although I'm a bit worried about the Serpentina/Rio match. Justin and Sven are too cute, although I still keep giggling whenever 'Sven' is referred to as 'Mum' (okay, 'Mom'. I can't get over the fact that Americans put an 'o' in, instead of a 'u' when it's a 'u' sound. At least with *our* accents it is^_^).
Also, I'm sorry for not reviewing earlier. My best friend had a bit of an emergency and she was staying with us for yonks. And crying. And driving my partner and our son up the wall with her histrionics, but that's women for you^_^