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16emerald raven
aw porr jeff...bet he's feeling a little shitty huh? well i cant say i wasnt doing snoopy dances when eden got her ass handed to her but i do kinda feel sorry for her *shrug* i cant help the way my mind works...are we getting another update soon? pwease?
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Emerald RavenX x X
16emerald ravenaw porr jeff...bet he's feeling a little shitty huh? well i cant say i wasnt doing snoopy dances when eden got her ass handed to her but i do kinda feel sorry for her *shrug* i cant help the way my mind works...are we getting another update soon? pwease?
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Emerald RavenX x X
12/31/2004 c14 Emerald Raven
welcome back hon! happy new year and all that jazz =P
loks like edens starting to have more than a few doubts...and taras being undercover bodyguard - he's definately a very very lucky man lol we can but hope his luck lasts...another update soon? pwease!
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Emerald RavenX x X
welcome back hon! happy new year and all that jazz =P
loks like edens starting to have more than a few doubts...and taras being undercover bodyguard - he's definately a very very lucky man lol we can but hope his luck lasts...another update soon? pwease!
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Emerald RavenX x X
12/31/2004 c14 Untitled Absence
it looks like the climax of the story is coming to a head...and it looks good. I can't wait to review it... :)
it looks like the climax of the story is coming to a head...and it looks good. I can't wait to review it... :)
12/31/2004 c13 Untitled Absence
...intresting perpective, with Tara kinda going back into her Rio routine. Hmm...aliteration. Rio Routine. Words are s-s-so intres-s-s-sting. Keep it up!
...intresting perpective, with Tara kinda going back into her Rio routine. Hmm...aliteration. Rio Routine. Words are s-s-so intres-s-s-sting. Keep it up!
12/30/2004 c13 princess max
Yeah, go Tara! Eden's so horrible, I swear I *hate* the fight scenes. I kind of just skip ahead a bit, cringing (ok, I'm a sook) waiting for her to pull that bloody knife out. In a way, I kind of want Serpentine to extract revenge.
Yeah, go Tara! Eden's so horrible, I swear I *hate* the fight scenes. I kind of just skip ahead a bit, cringing (ok, I'm a sook) waiting for her to pull that bloody knife out. In a way, I kind of want Serpentine to extract revenge.
12/23/2004 c11 Emerald Raven
*sigh* when will people learn to not underestimate tara...it's just asking for trouble...
i dont remember the three day thing...*thinks* i dont know...i'm keeping my eye out for JaS though =PCant wait for more!
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Emerald RavenX x X
*sigh* when will people learn to not underestimate tara...it's just asking for trouble...
i dont remember the three day thing...*thinks* i dont know...i'm keeping my eye out for JaS though =PCant wait for more!
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Emerald RavenX x X
12/23/2004 c11 Untitled Absence
hm...baby-making is always an intresting subject...oh, right, I'm supposed tobe reviewing. ahem. well...wait, deja vu...I reviewed this on fanfiction.net! hmm...whadya know. well, keep on writing cause we'll keep on reading!
hm...baby-making is always an intresting subject...oh, right, I'm supposed tobe reviewing. ahem. well...wait, deja vu...I reviewed this on fanfiction.net! hmm...whadya know. well, keep on writing cause we'll keep on reading!
12/22/2004 c10 Untitled Absence
hmm...chilly. she's going through denial. that means that she's already lost the battle before it even started...now I think I can see where this is going, but with you...there's always that twist somewhere that completely throws you for a loop. that's the kind of writing that has people coming back for more.
hmm...chilly. she's going through denial. that means that she's already lost the battle before it even started...now I think I can see where this is going, but with you...there's always that twist somewhere that completely throws you for a loop. that's the kind of writing that has people coming back for more.
12/22/2004 c9 Untitled Absence
I must apologize for my reviews being so inconsistant...but Internet doesn't like me. Of course, if I only had my cable modem back...anyhow, this story always keeps me on edge! I love that feeling...keep it up!
I must apologize for my reviews being so inconsistant...but Internet doesn't like me. Of course, if I only had my cable modem back...anyhow, this story always keeps me on edge! I love that feeling...keep it up!
12/22/2004 c9 princess max
I hope Jeff's going to get over his infatuation with Rio, now they've had that little talk. And Sin...well, Sin is Sin is Sin.
I hope Jeff's going to get over his infatuation with Rio, now they've had that little talk. And Sin...well, Sin is Sin is Sin.
12/22/2004 c9 Emerald Raven
Yay! more updates! =P i loved jeff n tara's talk it was so sweet! Sounds like Jeffs abundance of boysih charm is starting to work at eden...she'll coem around...but I'm not liking this samuel guy *pulls face* meanie! as always...cant wait for more =P
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Emerald RavenX x X
Yay! more updates! =P i loved jeff n tara's talk it was so sweet! Sounds like Jeffs abundance of boysih charm is starting to work at eden...she'll coem around...but I'm not liking this samuel guy *pulls face* meanie! as always...cant wait for more =P
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Emerald RavenX x X
12/21/2004 c8 princess max
Rio's a smart one! I hope she keeps the boys safe, and that Eden comes around and is maybe a little...less evil.
I have to say, you're a very prolific writer. I don't think I've *ever* come across anyone who could write as quickly, smoothly (where are your plot holes?) or typo-less-ly (ok, that's not a word) as you.
Rio's a smart one! I hope she keeps the boys safe, and that Eden comes around and is maybe a little...less evil.
I have to say, you're a very prolific writer. I don't think I've *ever* come across anyone who could write as quickly, smoothly (where are your plot holes?) or typo-less-ly (ok, that's not a word) as you.