for The Way to Eden12/18/2004 c2 Untitled Absence
It IS Henry! Aw, man...why won't he die...
on the plus side, it looks like this story is gonna be good...
It IS Henry! Aw, man...why won't he die...
on the plus side, it looks like this story is gonna be good...
12/18/2004 c1 Untitled Absence
..oh no...
why do I get the feeling this guy is familiar...? *ponders*
let the games begin...
..oh no...
why do I get the feeling this guy is familiar...? *ponders*
let the games begin...
12/17/2004 c2 
21princess max
Oh no, poor Jeff! Eden sound horribly evil and jealous, as do Samuel and Sergei. Vile, vile people. I hope Rio doesn't get involved, I'm all worried for her if she's baby-making *and* having people come after her.
And BTW, I really like the way these two chapters are written. I love your descriptive paragraphs, you can write them without them coming across boring and tedious. Sometimes the long conversations confuse me, but these two chapters are fantastic.
21princess maxOh no, poor Jeff! Eden sound horribly evil and jealous, as do Samuel and Sergei. Vile, vile people. I hope Rio doesn't get involved, I'm all worried for her if she's baby-making *and* having people come after her.
And BTW, I really like the way these two chapters are written. I love your descriptive paragraphs, you can write them without them coming across boring and tedious. Sometimes the long conversations confuse me, but these two chapters are fantastic.
12/17/2004 c2 Emerald Raven
oh i was right about it being either jeff or shan...though wth the story being about jeff then it kinda makes sense...lol - i didnt think that far ahead...oh was i the first reviewer? yay! lol - i cant wait for more on this! i'm hooked already!
luv n huggles
Emerald RavenX x X
oh i was right about it being either jeff or shan...though wth the story being about jeff then it kinda makes sense...lol - i didnt think that far ahead...oh was i the first reviewer? yay! lol - i cant wait for more on this! i'm hooked already!
luv n huggles
Emerald RavenX x X
12/17/2004 c2 11Wolfie Star26
umm, i like this, but Calypso for name of the person Eden fought. makes me think you like the greeks. The nymph Calypso, who kept Odysseus at her island for ten years i think. umm anywa, thats irrelevent. hehe, this is going to be awesome, i cant wait for more.
11Wolfie Star26umm, i like this, but Calypso for name of the person Eden fought. makes me think you like the greeks. The nymph Calypso, who kept Odysseus at her island for ten years i think. umm anywa, thats irrelevent. hehe, this is going to be awesome, i cant wait for more.
12/17/2004 c1 Emerald Raven
hey hey hun! yay! the new sequel! yes! *dances* eden sounds cool! whos she being sent afer...its gotta be shan or jeff...am i right? oh and hwos the guy? is it henry? or one ofthe fighters? i cant wait for more! this is gonna be amazin like the rest of them!
luv n huggles
Emerald RavenX x X
hey hey hun! yay! the new sequel! yes! *dances* eden sounds cool! whos she being sent afer...its gotta be shan or jeff...am i right? oh and hwos the guy? is it henry? or one ofthe fighters? i cant wait for more! this is gonna be amazin like the rest of them!
luv n huggles
Emerald RavenX x X