
12/30/2004 c1 asia
maybe this peice annoys me because its so...childish. the imagery is good, the way you seperate stanzas by one liners is nice. i personally dont like this, but to each their own.
maybe this peice annoys me because its so...childish. the imagery is good, the way you seperate stanzas by one liners is nice. i personally dont like this, but to each their own.