for Slightly Used1/9/2005 c8 Ethereal Oceans
YAY! An update WITH the letter. I was so happy! Kim was pregnant? Ohie. A baby. If I found out I was pregnant I could never kill my own baby. No matter what. Kim was kinda cruel. I think Deanna has finally forgiven Kim for killing herself. I'm still not sure whats going to happen but I cant wait to find out. Update soon!
YAY! An update WITH the letter. I was so happy! Kim was pregnant? Ohie. A baby. If I found out I was pregnant I could never kill my own baby. No matter what. Kim was kinda cruel. I think Deanna has finally forgiven Kim for killing herself. I'm still not sure whats going to happen but I cant wait to find out. Update soon!
1/6/2005 c8 
1The Restock Bandits
Thank you so much for the review, it meant the world to us (I write Fermata with my friend). And you have to know, I was dying to find out what that letter said.
1The Restock BanditsThank you so much for the review, it meant the world to us (I write Fermata with my friend). And you have to know, I was dying to find out what that letter said.
1/2/2005 c7 Ethereal Oceans
OMG! Whats the damn note say? lol. This is driving me completely insane. I have checked this story every day for updates only to find out that you still havent put up the note. Why? Okay, I'm calm. This chapter was as good as the rest. I dont really think Preston likes Deanna though. I just think he's still in major grief over Kim and in some sense he thinks Deanna is Kim. I wish you would show the note! lol. Still awesome. Keep writing!
OMG! Whats the damn note say? lol. This is driving me completely insane. I have checked this story every day for updates only to find out that you still havent put up the note. Why? Okay, I'm calm. This chapter was as good as the rest. I dont really think Preston likes Deanna though. I just think he's still in major grief over Kim and in some sense he thinks Deanna is Kim. I wish you would show the note! lol. Still awesome. Keep writing!
12/31/2004 c7 17norway-dreamer06
That's a good story, although you should learn to spell. It's really sad.Keep up the good work. Lou-Chan
17norway-dreamer06That's a good story, although you should learn to spell. It's really sad.Keep up the good work. Lou-Chan
12/27/2004 c6 Ethereal Oceans
AH! I have to figure out what that note says. Why do you keep stalling? Dont you realize that this is some form of sick torture? Lol. Okay, I'm calm. Poor Deanna. I would hate to have people feeling all sympathetic towards me all the time. She handles it pretty well. I would've knocked Beth's head off if she had said anything about taking pictures of my dead sister and putting them in a yearbook. Anywayz, love this chapter. I too think that Deanna is pretending. Preston is so sad. Ohie. I cant wait to see what the note says. Update soon!
AH! I have to figure out what that note says. Why do you keep stalling? Dont you realize that this is some form of sick torture? Lol. Okay, I'm calm. Poor Deanna. I would hate to have people feeling all sympathetic towards me all the time. She handles it pretty well. I would've knocked Beth's head off if she had said anything about taking pictures of my dead sister and putting them in a yearbook. Anywayz, love this chapter. I too think that Deanna is pretending. Preston is so sad. Ohie. I cant wait to see what the note says. Update soon!
12/23/2004 c2 CW-nerd-12
Aw. I like this! It seriously sucks you didn't finish "I'm no Jesus," though! You can't just give up like that! You abandon your first draft and go back and re-write the whole thing, you don't just ABANDON everything! cardinal rule of long-term prose writing: finish it, damnit! hahaha. Anyway, if you aren't going to finish "INJ" then you can at least review my stories, "ELevator Music" (shich is kind of like this one, 1 of the main characters has to face the death of her older brther while everyone around her is moving on), "Standing in the Middle of Winter" (homeless teens, but not quite like Clarissa, or I forget her name... (damn)). or have you read, "Manny Michaels's Littel Sister?" that's my materpiece, something I've actually finished!
Aw. I like this! It seriously sucks you didn't finish "I'm no Jesus," though! You can't just give up like that! You abandon your first draft and go back and re-write the whole thing, you don't just ABANDON everything! cardinal rule of long-term prose writing: finish it, damnit! hahaha. Anyway, if you aren't going to finish "INJ" then you can at least review my stories, "ELevator Music" (shich is kind of like this one, 1 of the main characters has to face the death of her older brther while everyone around her is moving on), "Standing in the Middle of Winter" (homeless teens, but not quite like Clarissa, or I forget her name... (damn)). or have you read, "Manny Michaels's Littel Sister?" that's my materpiece, something I've actually finished!
12/22/2004 c5 Ethereal Oceans
OMG! I cant believe she left him a note. A cliffhanger? I hate you. How dare you! lol. Gawd, u HAVE to update soon. HAVE to. This was another awesome chapter. I cant wait to see what the note says.
OMG! I cant believe she left him a note. A cliffhanger? I hate you. How dare you! lol. Gawd, u HAVE to update soon. HAVE to. This was another awesome chapter. I cant wait to see what the note says.
12/22/2004 c2 26girl-23
Wow, this story is really amazing already. I'm not surprised though, since I enjoy all of your stories. I'll be reading the next chapters now...
~Laura~
26girl-23Wow, this story is really amazing already. I'm not surprised though, since I enjoy all of your stories. I'll be reading the next chapters now...
~Laura~
12/21/2004 c4 ACCOUNT NO LONGER ACTIVE 1
You write so well! I like this story a lot! Even though it is sad... update soon!
You write so well! I like this story a lot! Even though it is sad... update soon!
12/21/2004 c4 Ethereal Oceans
Yay! Thank you so much for updating. Im becoming addicted to this story. Poor Preston. Poor Deanna. I dunno how I'd act if my sister died. Me and her really dont ever talk unless its to fight about something. Then we'll go on for hours insulting each other. lol. But great chapter. They keep getting better and better. Update soon!
Yay! Thank you so much for updating. Im becoming addicted to this story. Poor Preston. Poor Deanna. I dunno how I'd act if my sister died. Me and her really dont ever talk unless its to fight about something. Then we'll go on for hours insulting each other. lol. But great chapter. They keep getting better and better. Update soon!
12/20/2004 c3 Ethereal Oceans
Ohie... poor Preston. This story keeps getting better with each chapter. I cant even imagine how it would feel to lose someone I loved. Especially my boyfriend. It would kill me. He must feel like dying. Ohie, this is so sad. Update soon
Ohie... poor Preston. This story keeps getting better with each chapter. I cant even imagine how it would feel to lose someone I loved. Especially my boyfriend. It would kill me. He must feel like dying. Ohie, this is so sad. Update soon
12/18/2004 c2 Ethereal Oceans
This is a pretty awesome story. You captured the emotions perfectly and was able to make it realistic. Not many ppl can do that. Update soon.
This is a pretty awesome story. You captured the emotions perfectly and was able to make it realistic. Not many ppl can do that. Update soon.
12/18/2004 c2 17DOORphrame
This is really nice. I really like how you incorporated so well all the different feelings people feel when someone they love commits suicide. Keep it up!
17DOORphrameThis is really nice. I really like how you incorporated so well all the different feelings people feel when someone they love commits suicide. Keep it up!