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6/7/2005 c1 61The Rain's Kiss
Now this poem is amazing. I like the short, concise ryhiming of it and I LOVE the meaning of it. Oh man on man can I relate to this. I have been in this situation before and I know everyone has got their story, but let me just say I agree with every one of the confusion and toruture and abuse and deadness of this poem. It's frustrating isn't it? Awesome.
12/18/2004 c1 3areyoulistening
The Irony of it all.Good job.. I loved the You’re all warmYou burn me

and

I play with youAnd you love it

lines.
12/18/2004 c1 22drowning-inmy-owntears
I love it..I can relate to it.. good work.

~Brittin~
12/18/2004 c1 18PantherXeyes
I like it a lot, I like the way each line is short and how the overall poem reaches out with a powerful intensity. Good job keep writing and if you could R&R some of my work

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