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for Gentlemen, I give you Insanity!

5/15/2007 c11 Hidden Flowers
I am falling in love with this story, and falling hard.
3/4/2006 c11 23Erimenthy
*Drops popcorn* Cant-wait-for-update!
2/26/2006 c5 Mdlle. Nancy
Good story. Nice pacing and you've created a strange, unique character in Insanity. I look forward to reading more of this.

Um, just a point of note...don't middle eastern women tend not to have blue eyes? I think that is a European thing...but I could be wrong...
2/25/2006 c11 128ebonyheart
hey its getting better, hurry i want more, literally starving for more insanity bwahahahahahaha...
2/1/2006 c3 4Dirty Liza
I love the entire interrogation! This is such a clever concept, and your writing style is so subtly witty that it is impossible not to enjoy! Imagine being called Insanity!

I particularly enjoyed the irony of this statement: "Probation, for murder! There’s just no respect for human life anymore..." ...coming from the girl being interrogated for mass murder!
2/1/2006 c1 Dirty Liza
I'm intrigued! I was intrigued after reading the title alone. You have such powerful words!
1/9/2006 c11 5Madame French Fry
I am so sorry, i'm so stupid. you probably already have another one right now, i'm probably too late and my writing this is all in vain, but when you sent me the email for the beta reader thing i didn't respond did i? at that time i wasn't able to go on the computer that much and didn't have time because school was just starting and everything, but now i do and this probably makes no difference, but i really would like to be your beta reader. I know i'm just making excuses, but i would be sure to make time. I really do like your story. and while i was in new zealand i got really bored at the hotel at the end and even drew a picture of Rachel-Joy, so you know, i'll just stop now.
11/2/2005 c11 mistressKC
happy 2 year anniversary! Insanity seems so vulnerable now - even the most untouchable can be shaped and molded by the corruption in society... do I make any sense? keep on writing!
11/2/2005 c11 8Viva En La Eskabar
Great chapter. I want to slap Rachel-Joy though. Mind if I borrow her for a few hours?...
9/23/2005 c10 Nestegg
The writing was excelent but I did not learn anything from the chapter as to what the future holds for Insanity. Seems as if we don't hear enough about her anymore. She is such a strong figure and I would like to know her fate.
9/17/2005 c10 34Skiv
Nice, woot woot, one thing though.

"“That’s what I call it, can’t you tell? I’ve been collecting tapes and clippings since Aaron died."

Did you change the name of her boyfriend or something? I am confused.

Loves you Aslan!

~`Skiv
9/13/2005 c9 128ebonyheart
more... must have more...
8/23/2005 c9 5Madame French Fry
i'm really starting to love this story. your writing is getting really good. and i love this new character, Rachel-Joy. The dialogue is really good too. Amazing, i don't have anything bad to say, i want to see where this is going. and if the position isn't already filled, i'd love to be your beta reader.
8/22/2005 c9 24Sarah-Brighteyes
O another fabulous chapter. I am a bit dissapointed about the way that rachel is selling herself, but it is making for some great suspense. I love this story and I know you hve school and everything I know how it is... but post soon lol. Very nice... bravo.
8/22/2005 c8 Sarah-Brighteyes
Another very well written chapter. I like this one alot actually. I think my favorite so far. Sort of was expecting her to be talking to someone, for some reason it just made sense to be thinking that. I like that... very nice... touch.

Moving on once more...
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