for my scorsese days5/15/2005 c2 
44Stormer
Interesting. I don't quite know what it's about, obviously, but I like the repetition of 'she loves you more than anything' and also I like the use of two months. Not sure if they are supposed to be names (or one of them is) or months, or both...but anyway...I liked it!
44StormerInteresting. I don't quite know what it's about, obviously, but I like the repetition of 'she loves you more than anything' and also I like the use of two months. Not sure if they are supposed to be names (or one of them is) or months, or both...but anyway...I liked it!
5/15/2005 c1 Stormer
I have only read this first poem and yet I'm already adding you to my favourite authors list, also because of some of the names I saw in that musical list above :) I think you and I have a bit in common, at least. :) Now on the actual poem...*S* I thought it was great. Your style seems (from this single poem, anyway *winks*) quite original and unusual. I'll be reading more!
I have only read this first poem and yet I'm already adding you to my favourite authors list, also because of some of the names I saw in that musical list above :) I think you and I have a bit in common, at least. :) Now on the actual poem...*S* I thought it was great. Your style seems (from this single poem, anyway *winks*) quite original and unusual. I'll be reading more!
5/11/2005 c24 47i was a postcard
o-o-o-o-o this has to be one of my very favorite things you've written. wow. jiminy crickets! "sequins melt into beige" "a twist of fate and marigold it was" "his face smeared with charcoal" it's all i can say.
47i was a postcardo-o-o-o-o this has to be one of my very favorite things you've written. wow. jiminy crickets! "sequins melt into beige" "a twist of fate and marigold it was" "his face smeared with charcoal" it's all i can say.
5/11/2005 c25 i was a postcard
i know i've said it many a time before, but i will say it again: you do angst so well. "it's not odd, dear, not at all"
i know i've said it many a time before, but i will say it again: you do angst so well. "it's not odd, dear, not at all"
5/11/2005 c26 i was a postcard
"might as well go along with the joke i bit my lip on" that is a genius line.
"might as well go along with the joke i bit my lip on" that is a genius line.
5/8/2005 c24 84Escapist
Yes.Lolita. I'm all about the Lolita.
he did not notice me
but they never do.
84EscapistYes.Lolita. I'm all about the Lolita.
he did not notice me
but they never do.
5/1/2005 c23 47i was a postcard
i just have to say, the video for that song is one of the most brilliant things i've seen. that said, this is also equally brilliant. that last line...you just keep doing it, my friend.
47i was a postcardi just have to say, the video for that song is one of the most brilliant things i've seen. that said, this is also equally brilliant. that last line...you just keep doing it, my friend.