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5/15/2005 c2 35crooked on paper
This poem was like eating some tasty dessert. Yum.
5/15/2005 c2 44Stormer
Interesting. I don't quite know what it's about, obviously, but I like the repetition of 'she loves you more than anything' and also I like the use of two months. Not sure if they are supposed to be names (or one of them is) or months, or both...but anyway...I liked it!
5/15/2005 c1 Stormer
I have only read this first poem and yet I'm already adding you to my favourite authors list, also because of some of the names I saw in that musical list above :) I think you and I have a bit in common, at least. :) Now on the actual poem...*S* I thought it was great. Your style seems (from this single poem, anyway *winks*) quite original and unusual. I'll be reading more!
5/11/2005 c24 47i was a postcard
o-o-o-o-o this has to be one of my very favorite things you've written. wow. jiminy crickets! "sequins melt into beige" "a twist of fate and marigold it was" "his face smeared with charcoal" it's all i can say.
5/11/2005 c25 i was a postcard
i know i've said it many a time before, but i will say it again: you do angst so well. "it's not odd, dear, not at all"
5/11/2005 c26 i was a postcard
"might as well go along with the joke i bit my lip on" that is a genius line.
5/8/2005 c24 84Escapist
Yes.Lolita. I'm all about the Lolita.

he did not notice me

but they never do.
5/8/2005 c23 Escapist
to prettier girls, better girls

to life in general
5/8/2005 c20 Escapist
5/8/2005 c14 Escapist
Ugh. My favorite, this one.
5/6/2005 c4 6Nobody-n-Particular
Conveys the message beautifully and true on so many levels.
5/6/2005 c1 281Devil6667
5/1/2005 c23 47i was a postcard
i just have to say, the video for that song is one of the most brilliant things i've seen. that said, this is also equally brilliant. that last line...you just keep doing it, my friend.
4/30/2005 c3 612simpleplan13
could be metaphorical or just funny lol
4/30/2005 c1 simpleplan13
i love that last line... ncie poem
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