for Christmas Star1/7/2005 c1 
11Poetrybay
em I like the whole twinkling star thing and the theme of your poem is good my favorite verse is This star is so different, shining so bright, Just like the sun with its blinding light. I just love that verse and this poem and the poem is very great. It really catches your readers eye. Have by the way can you review some of my work as well and tell me what you think. I want good reviews that will help me become a writer. I want good criticisms that will help me when I write something else. I'm letting you know now I'm use to writing poetry and not novels. I wrote novels that hasn't been post it on fictionpress. By the way did Is say this poem is very good.
11Poetrybayem I like the whole twinkling star thing and the theme of your poem is good my favorite verse is This star is so different, shining so bright, Just like the sun with its blinding light. I just love that verse and this poem and the poem is very great. It really catches your readers eye. Have by the way can you review some of my work as well and tell me what you think. I want good reviews that will help me become a writer. I want good criticisms that will help me when I write something else. I'm letting you know now I'm use to writing poetry and not novels. I wrote novels that hasn't been post it on fictionpress. By the way did Is say this poem is very good.
1/1/2005 c1 3catalina58264
wah! i like the stars! yes stars, natural wonders that they are, are more beautiful than artificial christmas lights.. (although i also appreciate the electronic system of the christmas lights, hehe)i forgot to say in my other review, para mawala yung spaces between lines sa pagedit sa document manager, try mo ilagay yung cursor sa simula ng line and press backspace... kate
3catalina58264wah! i like the stars! yes stars, natural wonders that they are, are more beautiful than artificial christmas lights.. (although i also appreciate the electronic system of the christmas lights, hehe)i forgot to say in my other review, para mawala yung spaces between lines sa pagedit sa document manager, try mo ilagay yung cursor sa simula ng line and press backspace... kate
12/31/2004 c1 hellokittychic31
aww, this is very cute...!
aww, this is very cute...!
12/21/2004 c1 3Leo Eigenmann
Thiss is a great testament to a season, which I actually personally do not like at all. Here, you show me the kind of Christmas with passionate words.
3Leo EigenmannThiss is a great testament to a season, which I actually personally do not like at all. Here, you show me the kind of Christmas with passionate words.