for Sa Mga Agos ng Karagatan5/4/2005 c1 Elizabeth Bilberry
kamusta! ikaw pinoy? hindi ko alam. galing ang poem even though hindi ko naiintindihan some of it.keep writing.
EB
kamusta! ikaw pinoy? hindi ko alam. galing ang poem even though hindi ko naiintindihan some of it.keep writing.
EB
1/2/2005 c1 
79Spare Change
Ang galing nyo po magsulat. :) Napahanga nyo po ako sa galing ninyong makapagsulat ng madamdaming tula. Heheh... okay, I'll stop now. Your use of imagery in this poem is impressive (especially since I consider it pretty hard to do in Pilipino...).
All in all, fantastic poem. And, as you say, Mabuhay ang Filipinong manunulat! XD
79Spare ChangeAng galing nyo po magsulat. :) Napahanga nyo po ako sa galing ninyong makapagsulat ng madamdaming tula. Heheh... okay, I'll stop now. Your use of imagery in this poem is impressive (especially since I consider it pretty hard to do in Pilipino...).
All in all, fantastic poem. And, as you say, Mabuhay ang Filipinong manunulat! XD
1/1/2005 c1 3catalina58264
uhmm... hehe, may mali ng konti lang yata1st stanza last line, siguro dapat sinag. 3rd tanza last line, ilalim, lalim means depth not bottom. 4th stanza last line, proonin, typo error yata. 5th stanza first ilalim din.. mga palagay ko error hah, disregard mo nalang kung sinadya mo..thank you reading my poem..ümagaling ka rin naman magsulat noh... go filipinos!
3catalina58264uhmm... hehe, may mali ng konti lang yata1st stanza last line, siguro dapat sinag. 3rd tanza last line, ilalim, lalim means depth not bottom. 4th stanza last line, proonin, typo error yata. 5th stanza first ilalim din.. mga palagay ko error hah, disregard mo nalang kung sinadya mo..thank you reading my poem..ümagaling ka rin naman magsulat noh... go filipinos!
12/20/2004 c1 3Leo Eigenmann
Nako, ang galing mo naman. Bago lang ako dito, feel free to read my first entries when you have time.
3Leo EigenmannNako, ang galing mo naman. Bago lang ako dito, feel free to read my first entries when you have time.