
7/28/2006 c10 Anonymous
-A.N- (I dunno how to explain it…but it’s a table thingy and it moves around with many plates of sushi on top so people can just take a plate instead of ordering.) -
The word you need may be "kaitan". ^_^
-A.N- (I dunno how to explain it…but it’s a table thingy and it moves around with many plates of sushi on top so people can just take a plate instead of ordering.) -
The word you need may be "kaitan". ^_^
7/15/2005 c11
3Judy Kavanagh
Hi, I'm a writer too (on fanfiction) and I know what it's like when you suddenly lose all the enthusiasm you started with when first writing the story. You'd probb like to know that I was like that once, but I re-read my source of motivation and I just had the urge to continue writing my story...haha. Another author says to "Just keep going, and you'll succeed", and this advice has kept me going for a long time. You could try writing something "redundant" for the story, to unclog your writer's block, and then all the ideas'll start flowing...
Okay, I'm rambling. All I wish to tell you, is what the author said -
Just keep going!

Hi, I'm a writer too (on fanfiction) and I know what it's like when you suddenly lose all the enthusiasm you started with when first writing the story. You'd probb like to know that I was like that once, but I re-read my source of motivation and I just had the urge to continue writing my story...haha. Another author says to "Just keep going, and you'll succeed", and this advice has kept me going for a long time. You could try writing something "redundant" for the story, to unclog your writer's block, and then all the ideas'll start flowing...
Okay, I'm rambling. All I wish to tell you, is what the author said -
Just keep going!
6/15/2005 c2 Timidly
HELLO! Like when are you gunna update...it's been like years...come on man...this is a really really great story...Can't leave us hanging like this
HELLO! Like when are you gunna update...it's been like years...come on man...this is a really really great story...Can't leave us hanging like this
3/5/2005 c1 Divinereader
come on there's got to be more to the story
come on there's got to be more to the story
2/12/2005 c10 Lost Inside
AWESOME
AWESOME
2/12/2005 c10 Evil Leprechaun
great chap! update soon please! Laters
great chap! update soon please! Laters
2/10/2005 c1 AMANDA
u havent updated yet hurry up
u havent updated yet hurry up
1/26/2005 c1 AMANDA
UPDATED QUICKLY
UPDATED QUICKLY
1/18/2005 c9 i cant help it if i like love stories
i LOVE the story so farOMG u HAVE to write more its super uber great and i look forward to seeing more very soon ^-^ i aboslutely love romance stories and i have to say this is one of the best iv seen ^-^ just plz no gorey bloody stuff . im squeamish
i LOVE the story so farOMG u HAVE to write more its super uber great and i look forward to seeing more very soon ^-^ i aboslutely love romance stories and i have to say this is one of the best iv seen ^-^ just plz no gorey bloody stuff . im squeamish
1/16/2005 c9 Lost Inside
Its alright that you haven't updated in a while...Not like we hate you...
Random Reviewer: SPEAK FOR YOURSELF!
Lost Inside: SHUT UP! ! ! !
RR: AHH *Runs away screaming like a 2 year old*
ok ya...We dont hate you. I love it. Poor Khen, *Sniffle* lol This story is soo awesome! Update soon. I hope the next chapter is as good (Or better) than this one!
Its alright that you haven't updated in a while...Not like we hate you...
Random Reviewer: SPEAK FOR YOURSELF!
Lost Inside: SHUT UP! ! ! !
RR: AHH *Runs away screaming like a 2 year old*
ok ya...We dont hate you. I love it. Poor Khen, *Sniffle* lol This story is soo awesome! Update soon. I hope the next chapter is as good (Or better) than this one!
1/16/2005 c4
1Nerdette
WHoa! Intense kissing scene. So they are about 18/19, right? So they would be seniors in highschool in the U.S., but I don't know where this story is taking place? No setting description.

WHoa! Intense kissing scene. So they are about 18/19, right? So they would be seniors in highschool in the U.S., but I don't know where this story is taking place? No setting description.
1/16/2005 c2 Nerdette
This is a crazy plot. I like the silliness of it though. But are sure that Khen and Miyah are 5/6 years old, what they are going through are just a little too mature...
This is a crazy plot. I like the silliness of it though. But are sure that Khen and Miyah are 5/6 years old, what they are going through are just a little too mature...