for Who am I?1/21/2022 c1 Otakuami
Wow this was raw, true and explains your warped emotions wonderfully. Loved this poem,
Wow this was raw, true and explains your warped emotions wonderfully. Loved this poem,
3/4/2005 c1 GwenRhosyn
Hi,
your poem is well written, full of emotions and picturing the fake light surrounding you.
This is how I often feel about myself and my surroundings.
Thank you,
Gwen-Rhosyn
Hi,
your poem is well written, full of emotions and picturing the fake light surrounding you.
This is how I often feel about myself and my surroundings.
Thank you,
Gwen-Rhosyn
12/28/2004 c1 
14swisschick
very good poem, awesome flow, love the way you write over all.. i know exactly what your going through that was me about 5 years ago... i guess i should say that it still is. its a good poem although its kinda hard to say that because it is so dark and i just wish it werent full of meaning, but it is very excellent
14swisschickvery good poem, awesome flow, love the way you write over all.. i know exactly what your going through that was me about 5 years ago... i guess i should say that it still is. its a good poem although its kinda hard to say that because it is so dark and i just wish it werent full of meaning, but it is very excellent
12/19/2004 c1 6katiebuggie
Wow. That's so sad, and I can so relate. Excellent flow, rhyming, and emotion
6katiebuggieWow. That's so sad, and I can so relate. Excellent flow, rhyming, and emotion
12/19/2004 c1 612simpleplan13
aw great poem.. ive actually been going through emotional crap too... so i can relate.. great poem... and a suggest if youre not feeling well only write things for yeourself dont worry about the other crap
612simpleplan13aw great poem.. ive actually been going through emotional crap too... so i can relate.. great poem... and a suggest if youre not feeling well only write things for yeourself dont worry about the other crap