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11/29/2005 c1 1Amalthea727
Actually, I don't see much crap here. One would think you've been in situations like wanting to commit suicide. Or that friends of your have tried or suceeded. Your writing speaks to me like someone trying to open the eyes of people so that they can help others around them. That's the impression that I get.
2/7/2005 c1 17the-beautiful-tragedy
i loved it. the twist at the end was spectacular.
12/28/2004 c1 8gangster-dolly
To be quite blatant: That was some cool shit. I really liked the twist in the end; to keep the audience going. Nice work.

Emily
12/20/2004 c1 17DOORphrame
Very nice. I liked the twist in the end. Keep writing.
12/20/2004 c1 Ethereal Oceans
Ohh... that last line, I didnt want to die, that send shivers up and down my spine. Creepy. This is well-written.
12/20/2004 c1 61Stories-have-souls
Quite well written, the dying part is powerful.
12/20/2004 c1 69mostly water
Lovin the last line. ;)

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