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7/8/2005 c1 6Gilee7
I like this. It had a nice rhythm to it. I think everybody could relate to this poem. Personally, it made me think of my ex-girlfriend.
3/25/2005 c1 53Individual-9086
This was pretty good. I like the concept here. It could make some interesting fiction actually.
2/22/2005 c1 1o0oAnnie
I really enjoyed this poem...the idea of waiting for someone to open up is a frustrating one but the narrator in this poem seems to be patient and makes it sound like the trust is worth waiting for :) wonderfully written! keep writing!

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